awesome story. i absalutley loved it. i think you should make a sequal or sumthin where gary goes to providence to get syd back. that would be so cute. lol. great job.

reallyu good!

I like "Early Edition" so I decided to give this a try. Hmm... How does one "erase" a CD-Rom? "Child starves to

death" should probably be "Child Dies of Exposure". Exposure takes a lot less time than starvation. Only other

thing that felt a little off what that the firemen believed Gary almost right away. Normally he has more problems

convincing people he is right. (Like in the restaurant scene.)