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  Guest 9/13/05 . chapter 1 Please update "This Kiss" |
 Mako-Magic 2/17/04 . chapter 1nice! its gd! |
| Malistar 5/2/03 . chapter 1 Light! Now this is something I'd call fantastic! Goes to my favorite stories... Write more like this and I love you forever! |
| not sure yet 3/29/03 . chapter 1 interesting, i like it though, pretty original and i think you kept him fairly in chacter, nicely done |
| Katie 3/22/03 . chapter 1 I think you have a *very* good handle of WoT. I really liked this fic! |
| Lady Taim 3/22/03 . chapter 1 Good Lord! I am so impressed! I like this, I really do... I wish I could write anything like this..! Especially I like the ending, those words, "I am broken"... |
| Abigail-Nicole 3/21/03 . chapter 1 A little incoherent, but good the same...A little repetitive, too, where you said: "I am broken" so many times. Also, I think Lews Therin would intrude a little more than he did. Read WH! It'll make you happy at the end! *hugs her fellow WoTish people before chanting her key phrase* ADD MORE EMOTION!1 Who! Keep writing! |
| Luan 3/14/03 . chapter 1 I like! -Very- nice |
