thanks. we'll just leave the story HERE of all places and just run off for...four years. great. THANKS.


meanie.

wow. this is good. really good. like, really really good. and yet you've left it to catch dust in cyberspace! alas. i desparately want to know what happens next. and to leave your readers hanging at such a critical juncture is was horrible! to leave without explaining how amarie ended up in middle earth, without bringing us into the third age and the quest of the ring... does elros still choose to be Man when he not only knows how much his brother needs him, but also when he knows how hard being king is? how does elrond's status affect imladris? or his relationships with other people--celebrian for instance...or aragorn. i like how you dealt with araliel, i'll admit i was worried for a second!


so, i know it's been eons in the world of updates and i have little hope for any updates, but still. please? i pray that your muse attacks and that your story continues!!

Hmm, very good, you have a lovely writing style which I find so alike to Tolkien's and yet like his, I still find parts hard to understand but hey, you get that with Tolkien. ^_-

Looking forward to more!

Love Randa*

I was really enjoying this story and was therefore very dissapointed when you stopped updating. Please update soon.

(Arg, sorry that I seemed to have clicked the window from the wrong chapter while reviewing the last...)

The description of the fleet from Aman is truly beautiful: just so Tolkienesque. And the appearance of Finrod just made me squee madly.

The last plot twist is wonderfully startling (waves lil' Finrod/Amarie flag), and I'm very much waiting breathlessly to see what happens next...

Oh, Eru. I could continue to go on about how beautiful and awe-inspiring your words are, and about their wonderful rhythm, but I think I've really become a broken record when talking about your fics...

The wind, the way you slowly build up everything in this chapter, and then the star--it's all just stunning. And then the last line was simply breathtaking.

I wish more people were reviewing this; it's certainly got my attention, and I don't want you to get discouraged. (It might have done better in the Silmarillion section; more of the readers there seem to have actually picked up the books!)

Your writing style is superb, and the "twists of fate" you've introduced certainly fire the imagination. Keep up the good work. I want to know what happens next! =)

Amarie? *gasps* But didn't she stay behind in Aman? Whoa... do I have to say I am quite anxious for the next chapter?

"chapter does not exist" when cliking on chapter 8- just letting you know. This has cropped up very often on nowadays so as to bu a nuisance. keep up the great work- can't wait for update...

WHE!!11 (yes, the ones are intentional)

An update! Sque!

:D Sorry for the incoherence. But this story is still alive! I love the plot idea-I haven't seen it before in any other fic. I also adore the way you describe scenes and your use of adjectives, they're so descriptive!

More updates, please? ^_^

Chuckles... Think not that 1 person reviewed, think that 1 out of the 100 or so that read your story reviewed. Lets face it, I, like many others, read many stories & review on few (not that your story isn't good... it's very good) It's when you write an exceptional chapter or something that catches our attention that we review - I like your reverse psychology... it worked!

This is so beautifully and stunningly written that I'm just absoultely floored. You have a talent that is just a joy to behold. Please do not let this story drop, for it is wonderful and fresh and just a delight to read.

Leave it to me to be a day late and a dollar short, but I've just found this great story! I've got several chapters to read to "catch up", so let me get busy here! :)

Cool, Please update soon!

Aw, thank you, sweetie. *hugs*

Poor, poor Elrond. So desperate. *sigh* And thank the Valar for Cirdan and Elros to stop him. :)