Terrific story! But oh, poor Jack! You really whumped him but at least you fixed him, too! Thanks for sharing.

You are a very talented Author. I love all the stories that focus on Jack doing Special ops work or on his past in that feild. Especially those foccusing on Iraq. I haven't been able to find many but I have been reading my way through the ones you have written. They are all very well done and I hope to see more like them soon. I also love Assasin Jack fics though i've only ever seen two like that. Keep up the good work. Also I think the Sam/Jack bit detracted a bit from the main stroy line but i still enjoyed it. I'm not much of a shipper but i still like to read them occasionally.

More soon please.

Cya Aussie Mel

ok sorry it was good just a little well.. for lack of a better word... sick

what sick mind comes up with this?

Thank you for writing this story. It was well thought out, respectfully done with respect to today's military and enjoyable to read.

The only thing I found missing was a bit more of Jack's emotional dealings with having to go back. Obviously, this was hard for him so I would have liked to see a little more of that throughout the work.

Just one small note to add: BDU's don't have zippers. They had buttons. If you've got any questions, please email me. *bg*

Once again, thank you.

Eleri

Hi, just checking in letting you know I'm still out here waiting for more. Show more restraint than ever I might add. (For not bugging you sooner and WAY more often HA, HA). Did you drop the story? Should I continue to check for updates? Are you still woking on it? There are a million ways to ask this same question, but I'll stop there and hope for a positive response. Hope to hear soon.

A BIG fan of your fanfics

Angela

omg... all i can say is damn!... that was a realy really good story... please don't leave it hanging like this.

Linda

I know I can be a pain in the ass, but I need to know if you are working on more for this stroy. This is really, really good and I would hate for it to end hear. You can always take this as a hugh compiment, I only bug the shit out of the good authors. Please ease my mind (and your e-mails) and give me a sign one way or the other. That way I can either wait somewhat patiently for an update or move on extremly dissappointed.

Thanks, Ange

Excellant story! don't leave me hanging, I want more. PLEASE.

Ange

Very nice story. A nicely written story crossing SG-1 with real life. Ya done good. -Igor-

Hey, thanks for fixing the posting. Excellant story. I REALLY enjoyed it. I'm sitting here hoping it is not over. Are more chapters coming? There is so many unresolved issue here. My mind can draw its own conclusions, but I would much rather read yours.

Angela