I liked it. It was funny. Of all the things to force these types of guys to do-wow. Not as familiar with Invisible Man, but could hear the others clearly. I did want to catch Blair's reaction when Jim brought up his theory that he was feeling threatened by Daniel's presence... any chance of a sequel? At least for Jim and Blair with SG1?

Great story, especially the ending. XD

This was just too funny. I really liked the different rappaports between the "couples" but you did seem a little harsh on Fawkesy & Hobbes. I'm glad that in the end, Hobbes was right.

It was the waiter. ROTFLMAO

I love this story so much. I think I've read it about 4 times now. Great characterizations, fun plot, wonderful humor!

That. Was. Amazing!

Thing is, I barely know anything about Invisible Man. Like, I wasn't even sure I had the characters' names straight. And while I know the major characters and general premise of SG1, that's about all I know. The Sentinel was the only of the three that I had more than passing knowledge of. And you know what? I loved the story anyways.

I can't speak much for the other characters, for obvious reasons, but Jim and Blair felt completely spot-on to me. And as for the couple accusations... methinks the gentlemen doth protest too much. *shifty eyes*

But, seriously, the character interactions were amazing. Your villains of the week were just competent enough to get everyone worked up, while not a serious threat. And the little ending with Zits? Loved it. I wonder if there's a sequel? Or some other Sentinel stories that you wrote? Hm... Well, this is being added to my favorites list either way. ^_^

That was a wonderful story! a friend from the corssgate list sent me the link because she stayed up until 4 in the morning to finish it. And I have to agree with her, its wonderful. And three of my favorite shows put together for a GOOD cross over is always a plus.

Yep: hilarious all right! I enjoyed the story just as much the others :D All the characters were well written and you managed to smuggle in a funny line every now and then.
The only thing I'd like to mention (I dunno if someone already said this), but I think a bit of spacing would have been nice. Sometimes I didn't realize right away that the plot already moved on to another couple.
Anyway, congrats and I'm waiting for the sequel! XD

Awesome! I don't know much at all about the Sentinel, but I have loyally followed both the Invisible Man and Stargate SG-1, and I have to say your characterizations were great! I loved this story!
~outlaw author

That was fantastic! I want to read what happens next now. if you haven't written it yet, could you please at least think about it?

*grins* That was hilarious! I was giggling all the way through, and at the end, I laughed so hard the dogs started complaining. ^_^ Great story, very funny, great plot. Congratulations!

This is quite possibly the most hilarious thing I have ever read.

I love how each perspective shows the others in a slightly different light, appropriate to the character's POV, distinct from the others, but still recognizable. Jack's Simpsons bit was priceless. ^_^

I also loved how you showed the different dynamics between the three "couples." Your Jim and Blair were brilliantly witty and the "Jack." "Daniel." "Jack." exchanges were perfect.

This part:

"The big cop seemed like an okay sort, if a little too serious, but his partner was like Daniel hopped up on crack and about thirty eight rounds of sarcophagus. And as far as he could tell, both of the guys from Fish and Game were just plain nuts."

Let's just say my roommate wanted to know what was so darn funny at 2:45 in the morning. *grins*

Oh, now that was just TOO great. If you ever make a sequel to this, I will bow at your feet! I loved it, especially the very end, that was a very... ironic, twist. Never saw -that- coming ^_^
Lovely, pure genius!
Cathy @~;~

You have an amazing sense of humor. It's difficult to keep a long piece funny, but you did a great job of it. Kudos.

This is hilarious! Wonderful story.

Ah, I've read this once before on the 'net, and loved it just as much. You have a real talent with this stuff. Very amusing seeing the various heroes bite each other's heads off.

While I know you intended the ending to be just a little humerous add-on, you should seriously consider writing a sequal, or just something else where they bump into each other again. I loved this story too much to not want another one!