This was so beautifully written. You really got at the emotions between Kaito, Aoko and Kid. It could go on, but really, I don't think it needs to. It's perfect as it is. *squealy fit*

I love this loved this loved this loved this loved this.

Seriously. You are THE GOD.

-swoons-

I-I have nothing to say anything. ;_;

no, dont add more, this so works! i love it so badly much and only the best of the best go into my favourites. you know what? ur going into my favourites.

that was so...hott...


*fans self, then swoons*

It's really good.
I'd actually love to see more, what with my curiousness of what could've developed between them after the confrontation, more of Aoko's reaction, more of Kaito's explanation. I think there should be more to this fic. I personally would like to know what would happen between them after this. But then again, it's your story, and it's you who decide what you're going to do with this story. So I would not protest :D.

And I have to say, great job, for how you end the last chapter. The last sentence is salvation, I may say. When I read the last chapter, just nearing the ending, I was having thought like, "no way this is the last chapter. you just can't end the story hanging like this," but you proved me to be wrong, after all. Yes, the story is hanging. But what could have been is glimpsed through your last sentence, "And somehow, deep beneath it all, aching relief welled like blood from a cleaned, healing wound--a blessed, soothing, soul-deep gladness that her first kiss had been shared with him." At least I know that she has enough feelings for Kaito to maybe, work things out? :D

Anyway, I had a good time reading your fic. Hope there's more of your work that I can see :)

Cheers,
Ms. Greenpeace

You are right. On one hand--its like the story is complete--but it doesn't have to be that way. How did they resolve this scene? What was Kaito thinking when he kissed her? Why did he feel so compelled to kiss her and erase what he himself has done?Please offer us a means of closure because as beautiful as this is--I would like to read so much more how this scene plays out.Somehow like the taste and feel of a first kiss--it is achingly NOT enough.

You are an evil, evil child. And I think I love you. Keep writing!

This ending rocks. It solves the original problem (Aoko feeling bad about herself) while opening it up to a new problem that makes people want to read the next chapter. Now I am forced to read your other Fics so I can have more.

I like Kaito's unfinished thoughts.

aww... Why is there no happy ending?

aokso acts funny when she is drunk o_0

this. rocks.

Aw! Cute, I love it, and I think it's really well done. Heheh... I loved the bit at the begginning with them both drunk. I remember not too long ago when I first felt like that - absolute hilarity. (mine didn't end with a kiss, though)

I LOVE THIS FIC! I've never read anything quite like this, and well, I've read quite a bit of Magic Kaitou fanfiction. Great job with every thing here, you REALLY captured all of the emotion in this last chapter.

Haha.. some cheesy voice in my head went "or the beginning?" when I read the "the end?" part. I happen to like the fact that it's a hanging ending, which I usually complain about..

I guess it's how you ended it..

*sigh* three years ago.. time flies by too fast..

this short story(is it not??) is great. one of the best i've ever read :D