Great story. A lot of subtle changes and very big, good changes from the show. Thanks.

Why weren't you a writer on the show?

That's how it should have happened.
-Kate

No flames should be directed at your awesome story! in fact i'll provide the marshmellows, chocolate, and gram crackers so you can make awesome smores!!

P.S. Your story rocked!

Oh, great I love this ending completely... :) Okay, what happens at the cabin?
JG

Hey,

Loved the story! That was totally how those episodes should have went!

I like it!

AWSOME STORY THAT EPISODE IS MY FAVORITE AND I THINK IT WOULD BE COOL IF IT WOULD HAVE HAPENED LIKE THAT :)

Lovely story. Lemmie know if any flames pop up... I like smores and shall bring hotdogs.

loved the story,

That was so awesome! It implemented all of the best moments from the actual episodes while ending the way season one SHOULD have ended. And I admit, you had me fearing an ending much like the actual one. I am very glad it was not!

I enjoyed this. Love M/L stories! Keep it up!

Gotta love getting a review for a story you wrote a year and a half ago. I love people for actually doing the whole favorite story thing. I am so incredibly glad I found this one. Great story.

sick story! all the way !
thumbs up from me
~MD6

I've rad this story countless amounts of time and still Love it!
I hope you keep writting fics ust lie this and Keep the Freak- Nation flag flying!