Reviews for After the Storm

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Skylark 2006-05-17 ch 7, anon.	abuseI know you discontinued this story, but there are some things I wish to point out. -Elspeth and Darkwind are not lifebonded. -Kerowyn and Eldan are not lifebonded. -Just for the record: Firesong and Silverfox are not lifebonded. -Silverfox was in Haven that one time during the Storm series, therefore, it is likely that he already has met Talia. I have a feeling that Talia would have been intrigued by the art of the kestra'chern. -At some point, it was said that Kris and Lyra would be Monarch and Monarch's Own. So one of them wouldn't have been Chosen. I'll have to read more later...
Cesy 2006-03-04 ch 19,	abuseAre you going to update this?
Cesy 2006-03-04 ch 14,	abuseThere are an awful lot of mistakes, so it would be worth getting someone to beta it and correcting it, and Alberich's accent is far too strong for this point in time - he's been in Valdemar for long enough that his word order is fine unless he's under extreme stress, though the accent still shows a little.
fluffy bunny 2005-08-06 ch 19, anon.	abusePlease, please, please, recontinue this! i love it! i don't want it to to go!
SILVERFOX KTREVA 2005-03-03 ch 19,	abusethis is a kool story but please more dariand moments please
Trinity Kouya Hime-sama 2005-01-24 ch 19,	abuseLove it! Totally brillaint! You need to put more of Karal, Daran and Keshia!! please?!?!? Anyway I love it and cna't wait for more, so please hurry with the next chapters! Thanx!
Sheyana 2005-01-02 ch 19,	abuseMore More More!! This is the first time I've read it (I only joined today) and it seems you are long past your weekly deadline. I want MORE!! In this spot I shall stand without food or drink until there is more!! Even if this means I shall live FOREVER!
Kathleen McCrory 2004-12-07 ch 19, anon.	abuseThis is the second time i've read your story.I wanted to be sure I knew exactly what was going on and not miss something.Your writting skill has improved as the story progressed.I would like to know what else happens,please don't just stop at this point.I find it very frustrating when people don't finish what they start.
Stormshadow 2004-09-21 ch 19, anon.	abuseJoeystar I just wanted to let you know i just read your whole story. I enjoied it a lot. I think you did good with the plot. I'm looking forwards to seeing what happens in the next chapter. I'm happy to see that you have two of my favorite characters in your story. If you know anywhere wear i can find more stories that have Silverfox and Firesong in them, could you pleas let me know? Again just wanted to say I think you did a really good job on the story. From Stormshadow
Shadowfax 2004-08-25 ch 19,	abuseI love Angel, too. My friend got me season one on DVD for my birthday- I was so happy! Doyle is the coolest!! =] Poor Elspeth. She's had a hard time of it... but she was still being creepy. Hm... Who could possibly be behind this well-orchestrated murder?? I'm confused, and intrigued. Can't wait for more! =]
Michelle 2004-08-07 ch 19, anon.	abuseWow... I was immediatly pulled into the story. Very well written. I am not moving from this spot until you add more chapters!
MayonakaKitsune-chan 2004-07-27 ch 5,	abuseYou are evil, evil i say,...and i like it:)
Breezefire 2004-07-19 ch 19,	abuseI just read the last two chaps, and they are both excellent! Very good writing of the Elspeth anger, and a good depiction of how horrible and vengeful she would feel. Ventar is dead...another twist? One thing, I don't believe the Heralds would consider the investigation at "an end," as Talia said, with so many ends left hanging, such as the bottle of argonel. They wish to appease Selenay, but the Heralds are fairly independent, and they would want to make sure that this kind of murder operation would never happen again. Anyways, I will stop the nitpicking...excellent chapter and a great read, good plot development and especially character development for Elspeth. Update soon! ~Wind to thy wings, Breezefire~
Vaches 2004-07-18 ch 19, anon.	abuseI've been avoiding this story for quite awhile- probably because of the length- but finally light dawned and I started to read. Phew. Lucky for me. I really, really, really like this story. The writing is realistic- along with character developements and so on and so forth. But I'm sure many people have already told you this and I'm just beating a dead stick to it's grave. Sorry (^_^) Anyway, I loved angry Selenay. The only thing I miss is Darian and Keisha. They don't seem to be in the story very often and I adore there characters. Don't really know why... shrug Who knows?
Queen's Own 2004-07-18 ch 19,	abusewait- it doesn't say lyra's still sleeping. does that just mean you didn't want to repeat again or that lyra is going to stop sleeping? i'm guessing the former but you can't blame a girl for hoping! neways, great chap as usual. Zhai'helleva! ~Queen's Own

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