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| lunartick 2007-03-06 ch 19, | abuseOMG!! I've been reading HXH fics since forever and I can't believe how long it took me to find this fic!! This is one of the most incredible fics I have read in years!! It's definitely going into my favourites so I can keep re-reading it! Lol!! Good work, though I see this was done quite some time ago. Still, it is absolutely impressive!! I get the chills thinking how much better you must have become since this fic!! |
| koneko bombay 2006-11-06 ch 19, | abuseFan-freakin-tasitc! Hearts and love for you my dear. The whole thing was just amazing. One of the best HxH fics I've read in quite some time. Certainly on par with Wild Hearts. Love, just so much love. |
| nightmole 2006-03-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseQuoll is a bit out of character. But I do like this Quoll and all his interaction with kurapika. |
| firedraygon 2006-01-07 ch 19, | abuseI'd put this off for such a long time because of the _length_, but it was definitely worth reading. XP Haha, I love how you incorporate the Chimera Ants into the story. ^^ Awesome work. I'd give a more fleshed out comment, but _man_, it's late (or early...?). This fic kept me up past 6:00am. XD; Looking forward to more HxH stuff from you~! ~firedraygon97 |
| Yukitsu 2005-08-29 ch 19, | abuse*applause* Well then. I suppose that's the end of the extremely interesting ride. I particularly like the bit with Kuroro being lazy and Kurapika admonishing his brother and his grandfather. XD Thank you for writing this! |
| keiiris 2005-08-27 ch 19, anon. | abuse*clap clap clap* wonderful story! great! I just spent the last few hours reading your entire story from the beginning and it was fantastic! You write awfully well, i need more stories of yours in |
| Maaya 2005-08-04 ch 18, | abuseOh, wow. I've spent all day reading this story. Stories like these are the reason I manage to stay in the HxH fandom. Much love. *fangirls a bit* Am impatiently waiting for more now. =D |
| Rising Wind Tiger 2005-07-30 ch 18, | abusethis is a great storyline. i kinda wonder the same thing when i noticed kuroro's huge eyes. hehe, im feel really anxious for the next chapter. btw, in this story they wiped out the chimera ants, so that means gon, killua, the hunter chairman and the rest of them are gonna get rid of the stragglers? |
| lynlyn 2005-07-03 ch 15, | abuseWoot. I'm reviewer number 100... And it's high time that I got off my butt and reviewed all the chapters I missed. Kuroro and Arissen interaction - Loved that bit about daddy grounding Kuroro for his fashion sense. Once again your talent at writing interactions between unlikely characters makes the story itself so believable. I found myself looking for signs of the old enmity in the second part, where Kurapika's scheming with Feitan and company, but everone's mellowed down nicely in the face of Kuroro's abduction - perhaps just a bit out-of-character if you want to base things on the canon, but I don't see anything that would hurt the flow of your plotline. Oh, and Kurapika yelling at Phinx and Feitan to settle their argument with a coin-toss? That was priceless! "at least two teams too close to winning..." - Gon and Killua somewhere in those two teams, I'd gather? I'm jealous of the way you're able to come up with new skills so easily. It's something that I dare not do lightly - too scared that Togashi might suddenly release a chapter with more information on unknown skills... |
| laineyue 2005-06-04 ch 18, | abusehiya! really liked your fic! yues and its a non yaoi! i like the idea of Kuroro and Kurapika being brothers. this is an AU fic right so I don't think I have to remind you that Kurapika can only kill Geneiryodan members coz of the Judgement chain he used to himself. Oh I found out a song that can reate more or less in this fic its "Wash it all way" by Evanescence: "You hold the answers deep within your own mind. Consciously, you've forgotten it. That's the way the human mind works. Whenever something is too unpleasant, too shameful for us to entertain, we reject it. (Can't wash it all away) We erase it from our memories. (Can't wash it all away) But the answer is always there." (Can't wash it all away) that's the beginning of the song in a voice of a preacher or something like that. hey email me if you can and have time! you're one of the 3 fics that i liked here HXH I like fics that showed some maturity and collective thoughts... Hoshnin? i don't know that language but I seem to understand it in my subsconcoiusness.. heheh Ü More power and godspeed! (Ayan, Philippines) |
| DraejonSoul 2005-05-21 ch 18, | abuseI'm really glad to see this story back. And like Yukitsu, kinda sad that we'll be seeing the end. That's an interesting take on Quoll's personality, that concept of yours on why he's a good thief, and his unquenchable desire for, well, to get anything he wants. I really like how things are slowly tying up. Hang on. When you mentioned that guy they met on the plane, are you referring to Abram Sirsun, the guy who's also from Star City? =O Just one little detail I noticed. I just can't imagine Quoll saying "get the hell out of Dodge", if you know what I mean. ^_^ Oh, and I was wondering if I can either link to this fic, or archive it on my page one day (when I get things organized within this century. ^^;)? |
| Yukitsu 2005-01-24 ch 17, anon. | abuseI say that this has been a rather enlightening chapter. I can feel that the end is indeed near. (sob) Anyway, I like the realization Kurapika makes about his enemies not being 2D. Very insightful. XD And, I also like Feitan's character here. It's unlike the common attitude he has in other fanfics -- somewhat refreshing. The clone issue.. I agree with the doctor -- I don't think cloning will be able to bring the souls back. Does that mean they'll have new Kuruta? ooh... Sequel? XD |
| DraejonSoul 2005-01-17 ch 17, | abuseI'm very glad you updated! ^_^ I thought you were leaving this story to the termites. =P And thanks for clearing up that question about the doctor's all-too-willingness to help. Though it makes me wonder why she did it in the first place. Is it only because she's a scientist? IMHO, you're kinda getting out of touch with Quoll and Co. Not sure if it's because you're doing another fic. It could just be me, but some expressions (gee, shoulda) Quoll used doesn't sound much like him. Oh, hell. I haven't been reading/watching much of HxH stuff lately, either. ^_^ But, still. I welcome the update. Hope the next chapter will be up soon. [Sorry if my reviews of late lack more intelligible comments. Am doing the reading/reviewing in between work. My bad. |
| Yohko-Sakura 2004-12-01 ch 16, anon. | abusehmnm..I'm glad Kuroro's with them now. I'll be waiting for your next update. |
| acechan 2004-10-28 ch 16, anon. | abuseYay, carnage!! *ahem* This story is so complex and fascinating--both the plot, and the character development. And may I say, I'm quite impressed at how well you've managed to balance the two. And filled with glee that there is such wonderful HxH fic, especially when I can barely find the manga (kicks Toriyama's World for not translating faster). I love how well Kurapika has been getting along with the Spider (especially Feitan), and the elaboration on Quoll's upbringing, and I badly wanted to huggle Kurapika towards the end of this chapter. LOVE!! |