This is definitely a T rating. And when you make a noise it' s 'groan' not 'grown'. It was good. I can't believe what talent you have. It's amazing! It pulled me in and I couldn't stop reading until the end.

- Happy Writing, Jazz

Hey love you're story someone must have already said this but ron didn't go with mione to the yule ball. just sayin no biggy email me if ya want

Very good! wow, gay ron. hm. never thought of that. it would explain why he didn't notice until fouth year that hermione was 'a girl', cuz it wasn't in his-um- nature to notice girls at all. very good. i cant wait to go read the neville one. in the summaries u should write 'companion piece to 'Personal Hell' so people know to read them together. great job! goin on my faves

This is really interesting. I read the other part as well, and I can't wait to see the third and final story. I think perhaps it woulda been better to have them as three chapters of the same story, but it is fine as it is. Hurry with the third section! I can't wait to see them together.they would be so cute! Great writing and keep it up!