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| Estel A Duath 2004-08-15 ch 1,  | abuseIm interested in the one i just read mellon nin. |
| Catmint 2003-11-16 ch 1, | abusethe knife of grief was plunged into her heart again - now *that* is fantastic imagery. Wow. This story is heartbreaking,all the more so because it is so true to character for them all. It's oging on my favourite stories list. |
| Jen Littlebottom 2003-04-13 ch 1, | abuse*sniffle* Lovely, sweet and true. |
| Shieldmaiden 2003-04-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh no... I hate the thought of her dying! Please update soon. I wonder if anything will cure Elrond's wrath. I doubt it... |
| French Pony 2003-04-11 ch 1, | abuseWhen I saw the overview for this story, I cringed inwardly. It was labelled Angst/Romance, that combination of my two least favorite genres. ("Angst" because I know what the word means in German, and "Romance" because I just don't like romance.) But I said, "What the hey," and read it anyway. And boy, was I glad I did! It is very well written, neither too plain nor too overwrought. The scenes which need to be "onstage" are shown, and the ones that are better left hidden are implied nicely. The characters act realistically, and stay true to themselves within the body of the story. And you have also managed to convey ambivalence and resignation very nicely, which is something many writers struggle with. There is a minor problem with construction of plurals, but that is a piddling matter. This story is just long enough to express what needs to be said, and to express it very well indeed. |
| Sulwen Undomiel 2003-03-17 ch 1, | abusewow!only nine reviews? this story deserves more!! it is very sad! *puts on head phones* WE ALL NEED A LITLE BIT OF BARNEY MUSIC!! *gets out 3 head phones and puts them on, Arwen, Gimli and Legolas* Legolas, Arwen, Gimli: *blink, blink* -MUAHAHA!! THE BARNEY MUSIC ALWAYS WORKS!! -Sulwen Undomeil |
| Kaz 2003-03-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw that was so sad :( sob sob was beautifully written though Love Kaz xx |
| Dragon Confused 2003-03-12 ch 1, | abuseThat was beautiful! I'm so glad I read it! :) |
| WilliamsXev 2003-03-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love it! Keep writing. I especially like the dialogue that you write for Gimli. It's perfect. |
| leiasky 2003-03-10 ch 1, | abuse*whimper* That was so sad! But very well done. I'm a big fan of angst so thanks for this lovely story! Do write more! |
| shattered elf 2003-03-10 ch 1, anon. | abusehey! that was a really good fic i loved it! i wouuld love to recieve up dates love much |
| crazyLOTRfan 2003-03-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseAwesome start! Looks like an excellent read! I can't wait to see Elrond's reaction.update soon! |