Shadowlord: Hm...I -suppose-, technically speaking, it's alright, but...grammar, please. That's a given. And...*shudders* Self-inserts are bad. BAD...
Unless it's in Anime Feud, of course. Then it's good.
But seriously. Bad.
*rereads* You know, if it was a choice between the Shuffles and Ulube, I think I'd have to go with Ulube. But that's just me. I'm the only one around who actually dislikes cliches. Unless they involve Kyoji. Or Schwarz.
Later, folks.

Wow! That was a deep poem. It reminds me of the kind of poems my friend writes. Like I said before it was very deep, and very moving.

Hehe, I like to believe that when people write they make a difference in someone's life, because the words move them and stay with them. That maybe this one story or poem can make someone's day. I was think these thoughts when reading the poem, and hoe it says you think some of these questions, I can only hope, that this is a good reply. Keep up the good work. I enjoy reading your poems so far, I hope you write more.

Always,

Alimoe 0D

That was really good!