funny...i started reading this at about 4:30 in the morning. is that a coincidence? no...good story though...and it brought up some thoughts that never occurred to me, about both my mom and about Ranma 1/2...

I loved it so much , I also loved the other one about Rama being ill it´s so good , sweet and funny too , good job^_*

great work of writing Akane's POV. *thumbs up*

Aw... That was beyond sweet. I honestly loved it so much.

Well, much as it pains me to say it, this was really good. I really never thought of Akane as being that hateful of a simple fact...or just jealous...or whatever...but you really captured that fine detail. All in all, very enjoyable.

You know I never noticed that not one main character has a mother in the Ranmaverse with the exception of Ranma.
Good one shot.

Um this is kindof strange i'm sorry to say. What was the point of this whole story? Sorry if I'm oblivious to such things but i just dont get it!

That was really really sad, but good though!

Very nice

*sniffle* Your short story is really good. I hope you change your mind about it being one-shot. It would be cool to see how Ranma's relationship with his mom was after Nodoka finds out that Ranko is Ranma.
You also did an awesome job of writing from Akane's POV.

Keep up the good work!!

Wow, that was great! Though it reminds me of something you wrote during "Shooting Star." Go figure! That was amazing!

This is very insightful and very well written. I have lost a parent, my father died when I was 19 and I can relate to the pain and the feelings expressed in your fic. You are very good indeed. Don't stop writing!

Cool story. Shows Akane's feelings nicely. Ya know,this makes ya wonder how she really felt in the anime or manga. Could've been just like this.

Ja ne!

not bad, you very acurately captured the essence of Akane with this short piece, revealing both her softer and harder sides, the good and the bad of what makes her special.

a little cliche, but nicely handled.

*sniff*. ;_;