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Reviews For: A Dark Moon over Deling City - Reviews: Page 1 of 4

Jayliyah
2005-10-29
ch 4,
abuseThis sequel was great as well... I never expected Laguna to go.. Anyways, I'm glad this ended on a happy note and I still think you wrote another wonderful fic. Keep it up and I look forward to more.
angel-brokensorrow
2004-07-29
ch 4,
abuse*sighs* How I love this fic...I think it's, honestly, better than the first. But then again, comparing stories isn't really my 'forte'.

Anyway this story was touching and also very well-written, like your last fic. I'm glad it ended kinda happily. But then again...someone dying isn't exactly the best thing in the world. Regardless, I have said, and I'll says it agian. I love this fic. Right now, my favourite pieces of literature are 'In Honor of our Children' and 'A Dark Moon over Deling City'.

Your writing is so good! I feel like giggling. (Yes I am THAT weird. ^_^ )

Please continue writing, but for now, I'm going to scour your long list of stories for one that interests me. ^_^
Hecate
2002-08-04
ch 1, anon.
abuseOOh, happy again.I read 'In Honour of our children' before this,upsettes me it did but I'm smiling again. But oooh when Laguna said about how Adrian came to be ('like father like son.'), oh how the tension mounted!
Athena88
2002-05-30
ch 4,
abuseAwwwwwww, that was soooooo sweet!!!!!!I loved the Squinoa action at the end! What a beautiful fic! I totally love you for writing this!
Alan Tyler
2002-03-02
ch 4, anon.
abuseGreat Story! As well as In honour of our children, theyre both great stories!! Keep up the great work!
Yasuko Stari
2001-09-13
ch 4,
abuseIncredible story. I loved the way you portrayed the characters. It was perfect. Keep up the incredible work.
Happy
2001-06-13
ch 4, anon.
abuseLOVED IT!!!! I think your probably one of the best FF8 fic writters out there. I read 'In Honor of Our Children' on ffgurus.net, and I fell in love with it. It was so good. Well just tellin ya I loved your story! =)
liz
2001-05-24
ch 4, anon.
abuseok now u definately need a sequel
Bella Ragazza
2001-03-06
ch 1,
abusehonestly, how do u do it?
leah
2001-03-06
ch 4, anon.
abuseomg i loved it sooooooo much. it was sweet, touching, had a amazing plot, etc etc. you have a great talent and should keep up this excellent work...10 out of 10 i really enjoyed this so much!
Perl
2001-03-03
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow, and I thought I couldn't be any more impressed after reading your other stories! Your writing skill is amazing! Even though you manage to kill at least one main character in your stories, I find it hard to complain. :p You have such a talent for shocking your readers, it's unbelievable. I never know what to expect when reading your works and I am always surprised and left wanting more! My favorite line of this story is the last one about Squall's scar. It holds so much symbolism; I felt like crying when I read it. Truly amazing... Well done!
curbwakz
2000-12-28
ch 1,
abuseI read this a while back. You were one of the ones who inspired me to write Quest For Griever. You should make another part to the In Honor Of Our Children/Dark Moon epic. It is really great.
cc
2000-12-22
ch 1, anon.
abusewahhhh! You killed Luguna! But I was right about who the Dude Was! Now you should write a story about Rinoa being Squall's sister! Maybee I weirdc
someone
2000-12-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseCool! Love you're other stories too. Why do I get the suspicion Moonlight is Julia an Luguna's child?
Xenogears
2000-12-06
ch 1,
abuseCool.
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