 Forever Endeavor 2004-01-05 . chapter 1...XD! That has got to be one of the funniest things I've ever read. Reviewers are stupid. Hee! |
 Sugarpea 2003-05-24 . chapter 1Hah, not bad. I'll like to see how this goes.
BTW, love the sarcasm. |
 Mizu no Kokoro 2003-03-29 . chapter 1um, okey..no comment, keep working on it, okay?! |
 Sephira Strife 2003-03-16 . chapter 1That was not even funny. I live in Canada and my native is French but I think I could write better stories in English than that. There are so many repetitions! I wrote better fanfiction when I was 11! |
 Urobolus X 2003-03-16 . chapter 1Heh. That is a pretty bad story. You have so many typos it's like reading a story made by a four year old child. I can honestly say, I have NEVER seen so many exclamation points in my life. And humor, where is it? Overall, this story is a disgrace to fan fiction everywhere. |
 LazerTH 2003-03-12 . chapter 1LOL, ROFL and a bunch of other acronyms that denote laughter. |