ok...i'm back and...wow...did i mention your great writer? I hope you get back on fanficiton eventually and post more great stories for us readers

OH GOD!...i cant read on..for now...this story is 2 sad for me to continue reading at the moment...but you are a brillant writer i must say

Holy Shit.

This was even better, but this fic was just as depressing as reading 1984, which even the ending didn't do anything to alleviate.

Not to say that this wasn't bad, but I'm impressed how far you planned this story... 94 chapters, wasn't it? Jeez...

The ending was amazing, and it is only now I understand the meaning of the summary you put on the first fic in this series. Its interesting how something that small could have such a large impact on the future, although in the end, it was planned out.

Holy Shit. 10/10.

Best fic I've ever read on the website, and it's up there with the stuff I've read outside here too...

Okay, oh wow.

Your grammar is fairly good, but you have many slip-ups. Your characterisation is. . . Umm. . . Odd. Your stories (the trilogy here) were just so bizarre. You also had many plotholes in which introduced information had completely been forgotten when it could/should have been used. Overall, that means that it was terrible.

But. . .

I planted myself down with the idea that I would only read a few chapters of 'Everything Changes', and then just read an occasional few more whenever I could be bothered. I ended up reading the trilogy all in one sitting. When what was going to happen was the most obvious plot-twist in the world, I was still left guessing. I laughed at the jokes that you had written into the story, I enjoyed to read over the movie in-puts (complete with the voices and music playing along with it in my head), and I grew quiet and serious when I read over serious moments. I also found the ending to be very satisfying, and the length was to die for (even though I would have loved the chapters to be fuller).

That was what made it such a great read. I am extremely impressed by what you have written, and you have managed to do something that very few authors (on this site) are capable of. Overall (for a second time), it was absolutely brilliant.

I do hope that you do return to this site and that you do continue writing.

I am glad to have come across such a gem in fanfiction.

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG THAT WAS THE PERFECT ENDING TO ALL 94 CHAPTERS! But does this mean everything didn't happen..? My heart skipped a beat (for real) when I realized that the water in the tank thing worked. Either way I give it a * (5 star) even wit all the blood, gore, death... Anyway hope you write more soon!

Wow. I just...wow. I can't believe I didn't see the Celebi ending...but then, I'm used to 3rd and 4th generation pokemon, so I thought it was going to be somone else. *cough*Rayquaza*cough* There is just one thing I don't get, In Making My Way, why did Ash have the vision after he was attaacked by the Spearow? But seriously, I haven't read a better story on this website, and I can't do it justice so I will stop my pitiful attempts at praise.

It's great, but it's sad. I really wish that you could have sent Ash/Mew with his body back to help the past Ash rather than have them both the same. That would have been a much better ending in my opinion, but I can't change what you wrote.

However, it was a good ending because it tied everything together and was very clever.

-Michael

P.S. Could you do another story like this but not have Ash turn evil or something else that relates to Ash turning into a Mew because I really like those kinds of stories.

even hitler didn't create some good, the current peace in europe can be traced to him

and once again, awesomeness.

great story

Wow. Just wow. I was not expecting /that/! So what if this story is almost 7 years old, it was so good.

Hi,I'm Leone from Croatia and I've read your EC trilogy and,I'am IMPRESSED.The first thing

that got me to read it was that Ash was forced to join TR.This story had been pulling me to

read it and when Ash evolved into Mew,I was speechless,thinking:He'll destroy TR and good

shall prevale again,no!But when I read the chapters that were speaking about the Dark Mew

I wondered who was it?In theOne you brilliantly reversed the story,Ash now becoming a cold,

cruel being.I myself am a sworn TR and an Ash-hater but,I could never think Ash to be that

evil(he is stupid and too lucky but certainly not evil).When i was nearing the end I thought:

Oh,no!Super-evil,cold-hearted Ash in a shape of an invincible Mew will rule the world!

But Celebi saved the world and although I considered him just a Pokemon which should be the property of TR,I now respect Celebi a lttle more.This story was well-written,full of twists

and,since it features Ash as a very evil character I give the trilogy an A and recommend

it to every die-hard Ash-hater.That's the main reason why I like it,no one could change Ash's personality better than you.Your writing skills put you and your story very high in my top-list.I hope you'll read this,continue your fine work!

The name of this fic belittles the skill it was written with. It shames anything im yet able to do. while confusing at first I loved how you ordered this story as well as you're way of showing his mind regreting at times perfectly. the only thing that botherd me the slightest was I dont know what led him to this or anything about Nekiro(but this is probly cause I haven't yet read any other of your work). overall im giving this 10/10.

I am a big fan of your work, and have personally emailed you (using a different email address) to congradulate you on your work. It is truly inspiring. I am guessing that this story is not an alternate ending to Makin my way but is the correct one right? If it is, then One Heart plays perfectly into it. If it isn't, then One Heart must take place in an alternate reality or something. Speaking of that story, great... job... It truly catches the dark mood of the story.

i have now read Everything Changes, Making My Way, and One. What can i say? I LOVED THEM. i cant really single out a particular fave part, because the whole 'trilogy' was my favorite. Well Done, Dragoness.