Good fic so far. Sorry I didn't review sooner, but I haven't had any time. I have a few Yu-Gi-Oh stories if you'd like to read them.
~Melissa~

*Silver, Golden and the Mini BEWD all glomp Griffenfire*
Silver: No, the computer wasn't broken, we just couldn't get ON. *giggles insanely* Loved that part about ol' Yami B going nuts over the coffee.
Golden:*puppy eyes* You call him Max!! Wai wai!!
DN Max: -_-
Golden:*glomps Max* Are you going to do a continuation story? *bigger puppy eyes* We're updating DN soon!
Max: Whee.
Mini BEWD:*happy because he got hugged earlier* SQUE!

::pictures Yami Bakura in Man-Eater Bug boxers::

::falls off her chair laughing::

Itai... XD

Great ending, Griff. I like how you threw that little bit about the Duelists of the Roses; nice touch. ^_^

BTW; where's your sister been? She hasn't updated and she hasn't reviewed. ::pouts::

That was kind-of strange. I like the Serpent Night Dragon thing. Did you look at its card description, or is the 'soul of a wicked knight' thing just a coincidince?

*blinks*


*blinks again*


*stares at screen*


OH MY GOD! I GOT IT RIGHT!1one1sixteen

*spazzes out*


Muses: o_O

*stops foaming at the mouth and sits up*

D'ya need a description for me? *poses*

Email me if you do!


I WILL get back to Icetor...eventually...


*looks through mountains of floppy disks*

Fade:WHE!

Malik: I hate you, Marik, I really do.

Marik: How was I supposed to know that would happen?!?!?

Malik: Look, it's simple. Authoress = crazy. Authoress + Sugar = INSANITY!

Fade: *runs out of sugar* DRAT!! Oh well...why isn't my Malik in the epi? Why he no wake up?!?!!? I wanna see him...

Malik: ...I'm right here...

Fade: No you're not! *snaps fingers*

Malik: *is now wearing lavender pajama pants w/ little penguins on them and a white t-shirt with the Sun Dragon (winged dragon of ra) on it* *tomato blush*

Marik: Are those your pajamas?!?!!? You actually wear those?!?!?!!?

Malik: *even redder* SHUT UP!

Fade: Teehee!! ^__^ I love the story! Ryou is grumpy in the morning...you should've let Kura torment stupid Pegasus!

Bakura: Yeah!*realizes what Fade just called him* Hey!

Fade: Byes!

I think Dar was very much in character, especially his reaction to the Toon Serpent Night Dragon. Wonderful stuff! OOh, Duelist of the Roses...

*is happy* ^-^ Yay! *hugs* I get a cameo? Thankyouthankyouthankyou! Fear of the the Random Stick, eh? Well, I can remedy that temporarily. *snaps fingers*

Carrie: *is tied up* T_T *also is gagged*

Random Stick: *has been confiscated*

^_^ There. No need to fear the Random Stick when it hast been confiscated. ^^;; Don't know for how long though, as Carrie will most likely retrieve it before long and pound me to a random pulp. 0.0 Be thankful it's not the Random Boulder. ~That~ thing'll turn you chibi. I have hidden it far, far away.

Random Boulder: *is buried under papers in room*

^^;; Well, maybe not ~that~ far away. But nobody'll ever find it! ...Until the evil mother makes me clean it. >< Blargh blargh blargh.

Hee, can't wait for the sequel! *runs off to Fiction.Press to read "Dragon's Cove*

Review: *shall blow up in three seconds*

Three...

Two...

ONE!

Review: *doesn't blow up*

Oh blargh. >< Nobody ever lets me have ANY fun. *glomps Bookie* *is sent to Shadow Realm* *sighs* *walks into house she built there* -_-;; At least I won't be without Internet acess... ^^ Happyjoyness for prequel AND the sequel!! Yay! Cannot wait! ^-^ I'm waiting most anxiously for it. 'Till then! *waves* WAIT! ^-^ Prezzies are a must. For bein' so nice an' all. Hm hm hm... *assumes thinking pose* Ah-ha!

For Donovan: One of those foghorns; better then a chibi for waking up grumpy authoresses and an even PURDYER sword then before. *starry eyes* Because no knight is a knight without a purty sword...

For Chibi Donovan: A key to Candy Land. 'Nuff said.

For Chibi Zechs: ...Nother chibi, eh? Well, first off, as a welcoming prezzie, you get a hair tie. >< I know from experience long hair is hard to take care of and is annoying at times. So a hair tie it is. And for the ending-of-a-ficcu prezzie... *thinks* !! ^^ A never-ending bag of various gummies. *pats head* If you get on a sugar high, you might get your authoress willing to update.

For Griff: First off, here's another one of those Get-A-Chibi-Un-Hyper things. ^^;; You'll need it. Second, um... ^^ A hope that Writer's Block doesn't strike, and a free huggle of Yami-no-Bakura-sama. *grins* It's authoress powers. NUTHIN' can stopan authoress from fulfillin' her prezzies. So one free huggle, no free trip to the Shadow Realm. ^^;; Can't garuntee much else though. Them yami's is unpredictable.

*smiles* Hope you like 'em! *waves* Now I ~really~ gotta run off to go read Dragon's Cove. ^^ So after much sillieness, I bid you aidue. Bye!!

~Silvie

^__^ I get a cameo . . . YA A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A Y! ! ! ! ! !

Everyone: @_@

Ethelflaed: OOps . . .

I like this and the random English assignment. Heh. >.> Pegasus evil. Burn, Pegasus. MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

The coffee part was hysterical. Coffee . . . coffee . . . I'm not allowed to drink it, yet it calls to me . . . ^__^ Nice, black, bitter, COFFEE!

Oh, GriffinFire?? Would you (and Donovan) like to be in a story? If so, neomail me or review or something . . . Gah . . . I really need to get e-mail . . . (sits there, poiking neomail)

Oh well. Hilarious, great, AND THANKS FOR THE COMPLIMENT! (dances happy hyper jig around room)

-Ethelflaed-

Note: I finally got to see Endless Waltz. You're right. Zechs is cool. Not half as much as Trowa, but he still is great. ^.^ I feel emoticonish today!

Sorry for nit-picking but it's what I do, why did you make Aurther and Merlin out to be evil?
The shadow games weren't actually played with cards until the 20th century.
'Dragon born from the soul of a wicketed knight' Remember in the original fan fiction Donovan had a phy-chotic yami.

Fade: You want a review?!?!?! YOU CAN'T HANDLE A REVIEW! NO REVIEW HANDLER YOU! I deride your review-handling abilities! THAT WASN'T EVEN A CHAPTER! NOTHING HAPPENED!

Malik: Okay, who gave her sugar?

Otogi: (he is my subby-muse cuz malik gets mad at me) Griff.

Fade: *eating sugar*

Malik: Oh **...

Otogi: Anyhoo...(silver-chan is rubbing off on him) Fade says she posted two more chapters and you should R&R and also that she liked how this ended despite the fact that she doesn't understand the point of the story and why you aren't writing a lot more about Alvis (& Ryou...)
And she thanks you kindly for the sugar.

Fade: *super-happ-hyper-sugar-ness* BYE!

um...cookie dough? o.o my brains fried from school still >.>

Gah! Griff! That was too short!

::poke, poke, poke::

Write more next time, k? ^_^

Ah, that was funny, especially the last line (of the actual fic, you know, the one involving Donovan and the spoon?). Also, I liked the bit about the fight over the coffeepot.

Is Rex ever going to show up? Just wondering.

^_^ Woot! An update! Happyjoyness! You're writing a novel? I *think* I am... Not sure though. Plot is still being worked on. *kicks the lame plot in hopes that it'll evolve* Eh, I dunno. ^_^ Cute update! Lol over the cofee thing. The ice cream... Um, chocolate chip? Or vanilla? Glad to see you're making use of the Get-A-Chibi-Un-Hyper-Spray! I'm glad none of *my* muses are chibi...

Carrie: *whacks her with the Random Stick*

@.@ But then again, maybe I should change them chibi. Naw. *glomps Sirius*

Sirius: :...You really need to get a bishounen for that.:

^-^ Aw, but you're fun to glomp, you spoof you! I really liked this chapter; it showed that their lives aren't revolving around battles, and they have a normal lifestyle. Can't wait for the next update!

~Silvie

PS: *glomps Bookie* *gets sent to the Shadow Realm* *sulks*