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| Watcher.mine 2007-03-15 ch 1, | abuseI'm going to have to look for that park now. This was very good; it was light and sweet, but it still had the emotional impact of these two talking about things by, quite characteristically, not really talking about them at all. Props! And Sien Sien is amazing. You've got me craving Chinese! |
| BizzyLizzy 2004-05-01 ch 1, | abuseThat was so good, a nice bit of Jack/Daniel bonding. |
| Kyra2 2003-10-10 ch 1, | abuseYes, Jack is going to go to him. This is good. Danny doesn't need to be alone. |
| Rowe 2003-07-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou've captured the friendship between Jack and Daniel beautifully. Perfect! |
| Frisha 2003-07-07 ch 1, | abuseDefinately keep going on this one, quickly if possible. |
| dietcokechic 2003-05-13 ch 1, | abusei love your dialogue! This has the promise to be another wonderful story. I look forward to reading more...although i unfortunately don't have time to check ff that often. Email me when you post?? |
| Heather 2003-03-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw, that was so good! And sweet. I love J&D's friendship and I so can't wait to see Daniel back on the show! |
| Nixa Jane 2003-03-14 ch 1, | abuseI told you before, and I'll tell you again...wonderful. Just perfect. Now...where's the rest? |
| Layhla 2003-03-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseHei, my name is Layhla and I'm a German fanfiction writer. I read your story yesterday and I love it. Now, my question. I'd like to know, if I could translate your story into German? With your name and all that stuff. I would be very happy if you agree. Best wishes Lay |
| Sabrina Mecum 2003-03-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was so wonderful. I am almost tempted to say you should print a hanky warning but it is 12:00 at night so it could just be me. Great story - hope there will be more following this one. |
| sally 2003-03-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat.was lovely. Melancholy. A good use of sound and space and.texture. |
| sally 2003-03-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat.was lovely. Melancholy. A good use of sound and space and.texture. |