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Watcher.mine
2007-03-15
ch 1,
abuseI'm going to have to look for that park now.

This was very good; it was light and sweet, but it still had the emotional impact of these two talking about things by, quite characteristically, not really talking about them at all. Props!

And Sien Sien is amazing. You've got me craving Chinese!
BizzyLizzy
2004-05-01
ch 1,
abuseThat was so good, a nice bit of Jack/Daniel bonding.
Kyra2
2003-10-10
ch 1,
abuseYes, Jack is going to go to him. This is good. Danny doesn't need to be alone.
Rowe
2003-07-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseYou've captured the friendship between Jack and Daniel beautifully. Perfect!
Frisha
2003-07-07
ch 1,
abuseDefinately keep going on this one, quickly if possible.
dietcokechic
2003-05-13
ch 1,
abusei love your dialogue! This has the promise to be another wonderful story. I look forward to reading more...although i unfortunately don't have time to check ff that often. Email me when you post??
Heather
2003-03-16
ch 1, anon.
abuseAw, that was so good! And sweet. I love J&D's friendship and I so can't wait to see Daniel back on the show!
Nixa Jane
2003-03-14
ch 1,
abuseI told you before, and I'll tell you again...wonderful. Just perfect.

Now...where's the rest?
Layhla
2003-03-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseHei, my name is Layhla and I'm a German
fanfiction writer. I read your story yesterday and I love it. Now, my question. I'd like to know,
if I could translate your story into German?
With your name and all that stuff.
I would be very happy if you agree.
Best wishes
Lay
Sabrina Mecum
2003-03-11
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat was so wonderful. I am almost tempted to say you should print a hanky warning but it is 12:00 at night so it could just be me. Great story - hope there will be more following this one.
sally
2003-03-11
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat.was lovely. Melancholy. A good use of sound and space and.texture.
sally
2003-03-11
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat.was lovely. Melancholy. A good use of sound and space and.texture.
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