  Zach 11/30/02 . chapter 8 MORE MORE MORE THAT WAS GREAT! |
 Gryx5411 11/11/02 . chapter 1Great fic Mel, keep it up.
...Sorry if me and Liz (to lazy to type Elizebeth...oh wait I just did...never mind) offeneded you... |
| Schala85 10/20/02 . chapter 8 I feel soo important. They're looking for me...Okay, maybe not me, but for the person I got my penname from. Please continue! |
| crono 4/1/02 . chapter 4 Keep Writing! |
| Matt 12/14/01 . chapter 6 Thsi is cool. Keep going |
| The Benefactor 9/19/01 . chapter 6 Interesting... |
| Writer Chick 4/22/01 . chapter 4 This sounds interesting...and why is a boyband writer reading this...because her best friend will kill her if she doesn't...Mel don't slap me! |
| Angel of Hell2 4/6/01 . chapter 2 Awsome fic, dude. I'll have to finish it! |
| abcxyz 3/14/01 . chapter 4 You better write more! You know the complaint. Bye. |
| abcxyz 3/14/01 . chapter 3 Its all good. The story, I mean. I knew there would somehow be a Glenn/Lucca fling in here somewhere! Like I said, you know my complaint. Later! |
| abcxyz 3/14/01 . chapter 2 I like it. This story is still good. You know my complaint! See ya! |
| abcxyz 3/14/01 . chapter 1 Finally! Some one is not mean! Thank god! This seens to be a good story, but the prologue is short. My complaint is to put back up the "Sort by Author" thing. Later! |
| DragonPhoenix1 12/15/00 . chapter 1 Very, very interresting indeed. continue the story, it could be very interresting. |
| BlueGhost 12/14/00 . chapter 1 good story, and very entertaining. i'll be waiting for the next parts |
| Magus 12/13/00 . chapter 1 No... Alfador... why... why pick that tramp over me? *Reading the first part* |
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