nice story, I really like Death's character, and you got him spot on.

Proving that all sensible people hate St. Wossname's Day.

Dear Nomad:

Also, of course, it keeps the drink out of the Cabinet.

Sincerely,

Qoheleth

Absolutley nailed Death's character and Pratchett's style of writing. I like the bit about mass-murdering plants too XD

*giggle* I love your voice for Death, and the way no-one knows St. Valentine's actual name.

-May

My word...a St wossname poem from Death:

THE DRINK IS PINK.

I THINK THE DRINK IS PINK? IF I BLINK, IT WILL STILL BE PINK. etc...

Its so terrible that it goes to the other spectrum and becomes adorable (which is not a verb one normally applies to D. himself).

Good job on the piece, esp. on maintaining Pratchett's irreverent style of humour.

"He'd had to break up a fight between a rowdy group of dwarfs, which had apparently developed over the fact that they'd all become so drunk that none of them were entirely sure what sex they were, and he'd never actually dared to go over and find out what that pair of trolls was actually doing that was making that odd hollow clinking sound... "

Brilliant! Very true to Pratchett's style. And I do love your Death - again, very, very canon. Good work!

holy cow! that was fantastic! i loved how you made your pov character squirm, and death is spot-on in-character. your writing is also impeccable - it's wonderful to see the exhibition of vocabulary and a solid understanding of complex grammatical constructions.

This is a wonderful Death story. :) Death's poetry made me snort madly. Yay!

I love that!

very pratchettesque.

i love how death just doesnt understand things human.

"A bit worrying, really, that you were supposed to symbolise your love for people by going out and mass-murdering plants." - Brilliant.

I think you really captured Pratchett's tone here. The characterization of Death was perfect and you nicelly sqewered the idea of Valentine's day. Great job:)

I have this really nasty habit of writing: Aw. I few reviews back, I realised this, and therefore told myself I would not write 'aw' as a comment.

But, I'm afraid, such will suffice to say: AW. I love this. It's funny, great little footnotes there. It's cute... I'm adding this to fav. stories. I look forward to more discworld fic! You've got death spot on, and the writing itself is spotless.

it's just... really, really good. Good on you!

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Whay!

That was the first ever Discworld fan fic I've ever read, and it was great!

You captured the style and characterisation perfectly, even with the little notes*

[* like this]

I really am impressed. A very cute little story.

Well done!

Lol! This story is great! And this is your first Discworld fic? Hope you write more soon- if this is any sign of how good you are, I'll be looking out for your work!

Congrats on a brilliant story- keep writing!

*applauds*

Absolutely perfect. GET DOWN WITH YOUR BAD SELF.