though we know this didnt happen, it was still refreshing to read it.

Just like "The Hinkypunk's Lure", "Invisible" isn't a story that I came across in your LJ and was able to enjoy for the first time. This is an interesting version of how Snape turned away from the Death Eaters and fell under Dumbledore's protection. And all it took was our favorite twins. Any story with Weasely fluff is a winner for me. That was a big risk for James to take. It was nice to see him reunited with his family even though no one knew that they only had a month left.

Brilliant and well-written! You really captured Snapes essance!

Oh, but I *love* a good Snape fic. He's such an awesome character, so much depth, so much potential. You wrote him really, really, REALLY well.

love it

Excellent work! The insight into Snape was the best part, I think, the examination of where his bitterness comes from. It's often irrational, but deeply felt. He loathes anyone who sees a crack in his mask of impassivity, or who has the kind of love he longs for but would never admit to wanting (even to himself). I enjoyed it immensely!

I love this story... I've never read another take on this circumstance before but I think you've done a marvelous job.

This is freaking amazing! Wonderful job, I kept going aw at all the baby parts.

>:C
Stop making characters have depth!!
It makes me feel like a very, very shallow puddle.

Go Severus.

Wow. I really don't know what to say. This is a powerful look at Snape's character, and at James's. Wonderful.

This is an excellent story giving one of the best reasons I've heard yet for Snape leaving the Death Eaters. Wonderful use of language and canon characters!

Wow. That was a lot... that was... wow. Well done.

Great version of Snape's turning.

"I've always been invisible to them..." Perfect.

Do you think he ever regretted saving the twins (in moments of sour moodiness) when he saw what pranksters they grew up to be?

Nice! This was an original idea, and very well pulled-off. I like both your dialogue and your narration stlye; it all set the mood very well. Good work!