Reviews for Unintentionally Betrayed

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Shuutastic 2008-05-05 ch 2,	abuseAw, dang it. That's it? I was hoping for a lot more. This is very interesting and well written. I would love to see and read future updates if they come. :)
Ash Eyes 2006-02-26 ch 2,	abuseplease continue, i really like this story and u havent written in 3 years!
CrystalMew 2005-06-07 ch 1, anon.	abuse! I really want you to finish the story :( I lost contact with you like 2 years ago, I hope everything is alright. hope to hear from you
Chaos-Paladin 2005-03-19 ch 2,	abuseyou havent updated for a while now, did you get bored with it or something? or maybe you ran out of ideas, heres one, its a bit early, but do you think that during their dinner or something that the truth about what happen to them would be (or partially be) revealed during dinner? maybe some outburst by ash? or maybe there is some dark, unknown plot between ash and clark? that can be a good start for the next chapter. i would love to read the rest. if you need help or someone to beta test the chapter/story, i would love to help. i got ideas swarming my head about this already! please continue if you havent forgotten this, if you have, at least let me know (uhh...pretty please?).
ChaosDragon 2005-01-29 ch 2, anon.	abuseI've just reviewed your faq on Unintentionally Betrayed and I think this story could be really good. I am just saying that you shouldn't stop on what you started on. So I'll be watching.
Articuno 2004-08-15 ch 2,	abuseWrite more! If reviews are the only thing that gets you in the mood to write then here's my review. Please hurry with another chapter, I can only be a loyal fan for so long...
-Ballet-Dancer- 2004-08-10 ch 2,	abuse. .Write more. . PLEASE!☺☻ _ _
luke 2004-06-16 ch 2, anon.	abuseive read your fics and they are all very good. some of the ones i really wanted to continue have not been updated in a while. i do wish for you to continue this if you still read your reviews. this and master the unexpected
Star-Moon-Angel 2004-04-13 ch 2,	abuseHey What's the deal with everyone being worried with Ash and his "hormones" this is like suspense.Finish Plz
Kat 2004-04-10 ch 2, anon.	abuseFINISH "Unintentionally Betrayed"! Please!
DaJollyMan 2004-04-05 ch 2,	abusehey great fic, your others ones are great too ^_^. HOpe you updatesoon, please EMAIL me if you are still updating fics. ^_^
The White Dwarf 2003-11-26 ch 2,	abuseThis is getting pretty good! So many loose ends, I want this continue. Keep up the good work, and update often!
aoi senshi 2003-10-25 ch 2,	abuseC'mon! you can't stop here! you must continue! this fic is so cool! make more romance in the next chappie!
josh 2003-08-30 ch 1, anon.	abusethat was a very good story
Sydney 2003-08-11 ch 2, anon.	abuseMan ! I love your writings! there so great! keep writing!

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