Well, I kow this comment is coming 5 years too late, but I LOVE this story!
I guess I'll imagine the rest :)
Steve

This story is good! You should continue it! Even if you just add one more chapter to complete it! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!

Aw, dang it. That's it? I was hoping for a lot more.

This is very interesting and well written. I would love to see and read future updates if they come. :)

please continue, i really like this story and u havent written in 3 years!

! I really want you to finish the story :(

I lost contact with you like 2 years ago, I hope everything is alright.

hope to hear from you

you havent updated for a while now, did you get bored with it or something? or maybe you ran out of ideas, heres one, its a bit early, but do you think that during their dinner or something that the truth about what happen to them would be (or partially be) revealed during dinner? maybe some outburst by ash? or maybe there is some dark, unknown plot between ash and clark? that can be a good start for the next chapter. i would love to read the rest. if you need help or someone to beta test the chapter/story, i would love to help. i got ideas swarming my head about this already! please continue if you havent forgotten this, if you have, at least let me know (uhh...pretty please?).

I've just reviewed your faq on Unintentionally Betrayed and I think this story could be really good. I am just saying that you shouldn't stop on what you started on. So I'll be watching.

Write more! If reviews are the only thing that gets you in the mood to write then here's my review. Please hurry with another chapter, I can only be a loyal fan for so long...

. .Write more. . PLEASE!☺☻
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ive read your fics and they are all very good. some of the ones i really wanted to continue have not been updated in a while. i do wish for you to continue this if you still read your reviews. this and master the unexpected

Hey What's the deal with everyone being worried with Ash and his "hormones" this is like suspense.Finish Plz

FINISH "Unintentionally Betrayed"! Please!

hey great fic, your others ones are great too ^_^. HOpe you updatesoon, please EMAIL me if you are still updating fics. ^_^

This is getting pretty good! So many loose ends, I want this continue. Keep up the good work, and update often!

C'mon! you can't stop here! you must continue! this fic is so cool! make more romance in the next chappie!