great work I loved the story ˆˆ

That was a great story

Well great story once again. Oh wait I don't think I reviewed the last one. Wait yes I did. Anyway. Your superb mind has once again came up with a way to keep me captivated long enough to read this great fanfic. (Does any one think of tony the tiger when they saw that.) Back on topic I'm off to read the third of your series.

Great. I love the Harry/Buffy interaction.

amazing story loved it

Ok. Very quick review time because I just spent my getting ready for work time reading your story. A very good story. I really liked it. It was a twist that I hadn't really encountered before. And bringing Jarod in the mix was great. I did read teh first one first, but was too tired to review. Your stories are so bad for me! Because they're so very good. Keep it up, I'm gonna read more later!

I'm glad you didn't take their powers permanently. I LOVED this story. I think you are quickly growing to be one of my favorite authors, the more of your stories I read. Maybe their just too similar to what I would have done if I'd have thought of it first...heh heh. Anyway, your writing style is incredible and I truly enjoyed this. Now on to part 3!

Just found your story. I speed read thru twist of fate as I didnt catch much of pretender so I didnt know the characters. But it was a good story. I really liked this story. Im about to read the next part, cant remember the name. Or maybe tomorrow. Keep up the good work.

that was amazingly beautiful!...it was just gr8!!..i have no words to describe of wat an awsome job u'v done!...n honestly speaking i wasnt expecting them to get their powers back!i thot they wud adapt to muggle life n sort of get their own place,starting life afresh...but this was gud!after all,even if its gud that they can be buffy n harry now,they wil always be the-boy-who-lived n the slayer as well..n it was only fair that they were getting back to who they are...!i really think u'v done a marvolous job!hats off to u for that!it was n absolute pleasure reading ur fic!thnx!

Absolutely smashing. Bravo!
*snorts*
Yeah, it was brill. Keep up the ingenuious work. ^_^

Excellent story.

Great story,
keep up the good work.

4 of 5

Opinions are like assholes.
Everyone has one - but some just smell worse than others.

I love your story so far
i just felt the need to point out a flaw
you said early that the slayer was imuned to wizard magic but you have faith being affected by the curses this just does not fit if you have buffy being able to sruge of all wizard magic becuse she is a slayer you can not have faith fall victim to the same magic. if you had made it so buffy was immuged not becuse she was slayer but for another reason it would have worked. now you just a tangled messe.
i don't mean to be a downer i just felt the need to point of somethign you may have missed.

Well that was an excellent ending. I'm glad to see them slowly getting their powers back, but also learning to live without them--best combination ;) I have only two semi-complaints: 1) The Willow/Tara/Oz thing wasn't developed very much; Willow and Tara were clearly bonding, and Oz really didn't seem to be doing very much, but I would've liked to see it go a bit farther, although I suppose that's for the future, and 2) I wanted to read more about the whole "Buffy hating herself" issue; I feel like it had unexplored potential. But anyway, the story was excellent. Yay.

Okay, I don't usually review stories when I have more chapters to read, but I wanted you to know that I'm crying like a baby. And I can just picture it, with Alyson Hannigan's devastating eyes...