   F Maurice 4/20/12 . chapter 19Very good ending, You did marvelous with this story. Keep on writing. |
| F Maurice 4/20/12 . chapter 18 Oh, Ron's really pushing his luck. |
| F Maurice 4/20/12 . chapter 17 Okay, it must be near the time for them to make up. |
| F Maurice 4/20/12 . chapter 16 I do think Ron and Mr. Granger bonded a little over that conversation. I liked the way you worked this scene into your story. Good job. |
| F Maurice 4/20/12 . chapter 15 Good. |
| F Maurice 4/20/12 . chapter 14 Oh, this tension is slowly building and I'm wondering now what message is the owl bringing? |
| F Maurice 4/20/12 . chapter 13 Good. |
| F Maurice 4/20/12 . chapter 12 Oh, Ron was about to confess to Harry. I really do like the pace you've set in this story. |
| F Maurice 4/20/12 . chapter 11 Good. I'm glad Ron realized that teasing Hermione isn't the same as teasing his sister. |
| F Maurice 4/20/12 . chapter 10 Very good. Ron definitely was the knight in shining armor for Hermione - good title for a good chapter. |
| F Maurice 4/20/12 . chapter 9 Good. I like the way your story is going - just the right tempo, in my opinion. |
| F Maurice 4/20/12 . chapter 8 Good. |
| F Maurice 4/20/12 . chapter 7 Oh yes, Ron's definitely jealous. Good. |
| F Maurice 4/20/12 . chapter 6 Ah, maybe Ron's starting to get it! I can't wait to read the next chapter. |
| F Maurice 4/20/12 . chapter 5 Good one! Keep it up! |
FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination 
mobile edition