 Ducky'sgirl4ever 2009-04-08 . chapter 1A great story. Very good. |
 Dreams of Abaddon 2003-08-09 . chapter 1Nice fic! I like getting to see Obi-wan's point of view, because (of course) the movies focus so much on Anakin. I really like the last line especially - very effective. I like the writing style too - Obi-wan is composed even in his frustration, and we feel so bad for him being stuck between such stubborn Jedi (face it, Qui-gon did think pretty highly of himself sometimes). Good work ^_^ |
 Pequenino 2003-07-21 . chapter 1Nice one..poor Obi-Wan. |
 arwentheelf02 2003-04-01 . chapter 1That's good! I like it! You do a good job showing how Obi-wan feels about training Anakin. Great work! |
 Stargirl30001 2003-03-14 . chapter 1good job u have done
ps thanks for the review that is my fist storie i have writen on fan fic. aso u should check out the author Scruffylooking he has good stories. |
 Farore 2003-03-14 . chapter 1Good fic. Poor Obi suffers so much. C'mon let me hug you little Obi!
~~Farore~~ |
 T. Rodriguez 2003-03-13 . chapter 1Wow that was Great! you captured obi perfectly
*sniffles* i'm goona cry.
Anyway that was so god.
PS thanks for your review! |