hehehe... funny A/N. btw, great fic! write more!

I agree: this definitely worked. Wonderful story, beautifully written. One quick grammar thing: each time someone speaks (as in quoted text), a new paragraph should be started. And why does he have shoes on?

But truly wonderful, and I didn't think it was odd at all. :-)

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hey i cant sleep either! Wahoo i dont feel so alone now! you want to know how good your fic was? you made sleep so appealing i'm going to bed too. goodnight! oh and the narration did work ;D you did an awesome job.
~jane

i liked it but, the one big paragraph screwed me ^!

Not a whole lot? They got in bed together!