I do not like ur summary. The part where it said " Kirk becomes a god". A PERSON cannot become God. There is only one true God, our Lord Jesus Christ. I did not read you story, so maybe the statement was sarcastic, but still.

LOL, this is great!! I can't wait to find out what happens! I loved your ramble about Paul Revere, lol :)

.. whee

You must continue this story! The fact that the town is celebrating the 225th bday of a freedom carrots patch is the funniest idea ever!

argh!1 how could you just leave the story there! this better not be like the substitute where you wait forever to finish it! keep going!

Hilarious. Please continue! I especially loved the projectile vomiting oyster. I couldn't stop laughing, its just so funny! And keep the little end comments. They are the best part of the whole thing!

Keep on going! This is so funny!

You have a gift. Thank you for sharing it :)

Oh, dear lord that was hilarious! What are you on and where can I get some? Great chapter and it actually made sense to me but then again I have been told on more than on occasion that I am slightly insane. Your paragraph about Paul Revere cracked me up. By the way, the guy who really alerted everybody, I think his name was William Dawes. Yeah, I learned that in History class (the only class in school I pay attention in). Anyways, it appears that you plan to continue this story. I hope you do, it cracks me up. :-D

I'm so glad your back! Hope your family is doing okay...your great, and keep up the AWSOME work!

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Sweetpea, can I have some of whatever it is you're smoking? LOL. This was lunatic and irreverent and I can't wait to see more. Lorelai Versus The Pod People!

I just read your crazy fan fiction. I really enjoyed it; I was laughing out loud during class, which is never a good thing. I hope you continue to write.

Hahahaha .. that was funny .. continue!