Great story

Sad ending though, but could have seen this happening.

Oh soo sad, but i could see this happening. Cannot wait to read more of your work. Nice job!

karagrace

This made me sad... :-(

WOW. That was... amazing. A whirlwind. I LOVED it.

~IGC t DM

a really hot one WOW but it was a great one wish you would continue it

Wow ! It's really great. I love this fanfiction. It's really powerful.
And I especially love the beginning when Sara try to "escape" from Grissom's house. It was really great.
And I'm going to read others fanfictions from you because this one was really great.
allis

Dude, that was tres intense.
(But way awesome too ;-D so no worries)
Jess x

Oh my God! That's such a sad ending! I thought it would be cute and all that stuff...but good job anyways! I really like it!

Run after her man! Are you daft?

Very powerful and emotional. Such a wonderful contrast to your humorous fics. Great writing!

WOW! another great fic...your writing is so amazing, full of fire...so descriptive and encaptivating...every story i read of yours, i want a sequel! You are truely an amazing writer.

As always, keep writing.

BLAZE

absolutely awesome ! loved it loved it, but the ending...no no no, tell me the is a sequel

*gasp! heart fluttering!* that was unbelievable! you have become my fav author!!

Engrossing as always...and a sequel would be nice (Thats a hint by the way!!)

Well, that didn't suck! In fact, it didn't suck at all. I *loved* the part where Sara was trying not to cry; it felt very realistic to me. My only advice to you is that there *are* a few typos and other errors, and that sort of thing can be distracting. Nonetheless, very good story. I notice that you didn't talk about the case that upset Sara in particulars--was that intentional? I thought it was a good decision--the fic had enough of its own emotions without needing to rely on external angst like so many others do.