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| imjuzakyd 2004-09-06 ch 3, | abusewell, this is a nice short story... it's kinda weird that tears brought Brennan back but then... love makes impossible things possible, right? nice work... |
| lyza 2003-05-15 ch 3, | abusethat was really great. i really thought brennan would die *sobs* but thanks to emma's tears. Bravo! you did a good job. are you going to write another one? please do... |
| Redhead 2003-05-09 ch 3, anon. | abuseThe story was wonderful. I love the happy ending and the idea that love conquers all. Thank you. |
| Ruffyan 2003-05-09 ch 3, | abuseOh. This was sweet. Such a tender ending. Thank you for sharing. |
| lyza 2003-05-04 ch 2, | abusethe story made me cry. it's damn good. please post soon. LYZA |
| shannon 2003-03-27 ch 1, anon. | abusefor future chapters please use quote marks so that you can tell when someone is speaking. also you may want to have someone proofread your stories, so that you can be sure to catch all grammer mistakes. |
| L.R 2003-03-26 ch 2, anon. | abuseThis sounds like the beginning of a good story but your punctuation needs a little work. |
| Katianna 2003-03-24 ch 2, anon. | abuseDon't beta it! I love how this sounds! French is more poetic than English in its phrasing, that it's more raw makes it beautiful to read. |
| Ruffyan 2003-03-24 ch 2, | abuseOh...(sighs) I hope there is a happy ending. Adam, Shal and Jesse couldn't give up on Brennan so easily. |
| Ruffyan 2003-03-22 ch 1, | abuseI LOVE this! Not only is the drama fascinating, but I like the French to English flavor. So sweet. I have not considered English a beautiful language, but the foreign accents are throughout this story transform it. Tres charmant! (both the story and the way it is presented - sorry, my French is very very rusty) ;) |
| angeleyes46 2003-03-15 ch 1, | abusei can't wait to read the next part. |