As a Drakan fan like me, I can appreciate the work you have made. You have a marvellous introduction and you did not miss the most important line speech between Arokh and Rhynn (that part when Arokh talks about Dellon like he was nothing and Rynn jumps at his direction angry and start to call him names) and, of course, the ritual of the Order of the Flame.

Two words for your work: Nicely done!

Awesome! I really liked it! Continue?

WOW! really good story! keep it going!