plz send me ideas, and help me so that i can make simular but for 16+ i may be male(bewteen us im a **) but ima become a lesbo soon nd ill like help on making stories about lesbos. nd id like 2 become friends with u/ make u one of my mods.

cute story :)

great story

Cool story!

Short and sweet. Great job.

Darn Michiru...*mumbles to herself* Why does SHE get Haruka. What about ME?!

Keep up the good work!

Nice story. I like the attention to detail with Haruka's thoughts. There haven't been any good H/M fics for a while (that I've seen anyway). It's nice to find one. Please keep up the good work.

Really good story! Keep it up!

There aren't enough Michiru and Haruka fics in the world. ^_^ It's good to see another one of some quality.

I don't have much to say at this point, since only two chapters have been updated. I think it's cute how nervous Haruka-san gets, though (teehee).

Keep up the good work. ^_^ Good luck.