this is almost as goo if no better then your dragon story, with alot more substance to it. please continue, I want to see how holly and the slytherins (Malfoy escpecially) get along. :)

Very cool story. I hope you continue it soon. Would it help if I posted a review every day?
T

Hello,
I really love your two stories, and I hope you will go on soon with "second chances".
I'm looking forward to discover the "soul-mate" of Harry, and despite the fact that it could be seen as inceste, I think he would be great with Jamie ...
Moreover it's good to see that Severus, although sweeter, keep his personnality ...
Don't look at my mistakes, I'm french ...
Thanks for the great time I have, reading your stories.
Teo

Okay! Can't wait for more! Story is wonderful.

Thank goodness! Someone else who doesn't like #5!
I had to take a break from reading (1-19) to let you know how much I am enjoying your story. The meeting of the McGonagalls and Harry was great. I was so caught up by then that I was hunting for the tissues. I hope things keep going well even when one of the girls ends up in Slytherin and the other two with Gryfs.
Hm...maybe OUR Harry isn't the one who is supposed to do the deed on Voldie...or maybe together??...I'll keep reading and find out!

Omg you must have put som much work into that I LOVED IT! I can't wait for you to add more it is like my fav. fan fic of all time, it is also really good for english not being you first language and all, well it is wonderfull, keep up the good work!
Sincereley,
Athena Malfoy (kayla)

liking your oc characters, great story so far and looking forward to more soon.

I just started reading "Second Chances," and must say that I'm surprisinly impressed. You mentioned that English is not your second language, and one can hardly tell. Your grasp of English, and it's rules, is fantastic. It reminds me of my Father's. He taught me almost all the English Grammar I know, and his first language is German!

I find that your story is very detailed, and you seem to be very confident in your writing. I can see how this story would be the kind that many people would love. Though it is more of a story for those who want "love" stories. I will continue to read this story, even though it is not the kind I would typically read, because honestly I enjoy your writing style, and attempting to catch mistakes, which I rarley do.

Though I'd like to make one little grammar mention: I have noticed that you will often us good, when the word that you should be using is well. It's a fine distinction, and English is confusing. I dont actually know the rule, being as this is one of those ones my Father taught me. It's not major, I was just being nit-picky :)

Keep up the good writing. Kirsten

::dies from exaustion:: FINALLY! I'm done reading the chapter! Wow that was a long one it to me longer to read this than to read book 5! (just a little over two days and I was done with OOtP by the way)

I didn't like book 5 much either. I did, but I didn't. It's probablly my second or third favorite. It'll take a REALLY good book to knock PoA off of the top spot! (There's you a challenge JK! lol)

Anyway, back on point. GREAT, long, WONDERFUL, long, WELL WRITTEN, long, and ENJOYABLE chapter ^_^ Glad to see that you found time to write so much! I LOVED the wands, and I Still love the twins! ^_^ I hope Harry will be as happy with them as it seems he will be. I can't WAIT to see what houses you'll put them in! (not to mention the romances you'll have them develop. ^_~) Sorry it took me so long to read and review by the way! I've benn REALLY busy!

Hope to see more from you soon!
ttfn,
Lils
(PS thanx for the review that you gave ME as well! I eagarly await your mail ^_~)

*claps* Long chapter in which everyone at Hogwarts meets the McGonagalls! HA! Lol.

Loved it, update soon!

Hi Sun,

as I already know the story I wasnt suprised by this chapter. But I still enjoyed reading it so much that I have to write this: YOU ARE GREAT! THIS CHAPPI (and all the others) ARE SUPER!

GO on with the story

I already know what will come next - but for the sake of all other readers who dont know yet... HURRY UP!

yours Willow

love it update soon

that was sad.

poor g-ma rose.

::sigh:: so what is everybody going to say when the mcgonagalls get to hogwarts?

::SCREAMS:: I LOVED THAT CHAPTER! It was absolutly posotively my favorite so far. Why you ask?? Well for one the suspense and danger, and two I took Rose's kind words of deep meaning very seriously.(In fact it was so good that even though it's 3:00am here I HAD to finish it! ^__^) It was wouderful and I'll never forget it.

But I can't help but wonder what Grandma Rose did to Voldemort. I mean it SEEMED to be nothing, but I know with the fact that she smiled even durring death that she had to have done something that I think may come into play later.

Once again I want to thank you for your wonderful use of detail! I am ALWAYS able to put a picture in my mind when reading your story which is why I am, Of Course, always ready for a new chappie!

::bounces up and down while squealing:: Sortings! Oh boy! I can't WAIT to see what houses the youngsters get! ^__^ ^__^ ^__^

Hope to see more from you soon!
Lily

You're doing such a wonderful job with this fic. I can't figure out what pulled me in. . . but it's keeping me here! The story is unique and I have an awesome time reading it.

Can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon!