Did rory kill jess? Why would she jess was her boyfriend.

you mean, mean, rotten person... good writing, though!

so wait... what motivation did rory have for killing jess now?
she loved him... at least thats what you wrote...

I really enjoyed this. It was a great story, I wish you'd maybe gone farther with it but it's fine where you ended it. And about killing off Jess, I'm not complaining, I've done it once before (and then wrote a sequel to it as well) and I know people get mad (not as mad as when you kill off Rory though I've found [yeah, I kill people off alot])

Anyways...

Great story, I really enjoyed it!

I just read this story in one shot and I really liked it! I really liked angst stories myself...but I can't believe it was Rory! my my my...well thanks for the entertainment!

EXCELLENT story! LOVE the cliffhanger!

Wow. Not the twist I was expecting. But I'm sure that was your intention.

Not bad, at all. Very good, actually.

Only thing that bothers me...What the heck was Rory's motivation in killing Jess? Was she trying to shoot at the killer? Was she temporarily insane? Why would she kill Jess?

I just don't understand that.

If I were you, I'd write a sequel detailing Rory's turning herself in and going to jail. And thinking about why she did it. That would be original. MORE than original. If you write it, I'll read it.

Legs

but but but...


it actually does kind of work like that now that you mention it; there *could* be a sequel, or just leave it for you to ponder FOREVER!! mwahahahahahaha; it was good...i wouldn't *mind* a sequel...teehe...:D

lol, but yay, that was fun

Hope you come back and write more soon. This is a really good story and I want to find out what happens next:)

oh my gosh this is so good. Very suspensful, not in the ordinary. If you need any ideas i have some that i think could go with this story. Update REALLY SOON!

Ok... werd... I really think it's a great concept and all... but damn... that's sad... I'ma keep reading if you keep writing. :D

i'm sorry some people don't like it, but i think it's got a very good plot, and what a twist! i hope there's more to come, and don't stop writing because some people are too scared of the idea

what is wrong with you? how could you make rory kill jess? you are not a true G.G. fan. :(

Wow! I can't believe Rory shot Jess! That was quite a twist! Hope you update soon because I want to find out what happens next!

Ah when are you going to update! You have to update soon! I need to know what happens! Wow, really good story, although I too am I Jess lover, and don't like the fact he died, but as long as the story's not real...it's all good! And you are a very amazing writer and are doing a great job with the story so far! You have to update soon cuz that was a very interesting twist at the end and I am at the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens! Wowie wow wow wow! Hurry and update very soon!! Great story and everything too! And I like the angst idea, most people don't do these kind of stories, where Jess dies. But anyhoo...UPDATE! Hee hee!

Peace & GOD BLESS!