Excellent story! <3

i love how you ended it. ^_^ funny N awesome. loved it

Finally, I found a great story again! Lol. And from you again! You really are awesome!:)

lol! This is great! It's so funny!

LOL...I practically imagined someone counting 3...2...1 and then...someone's brother *cough* decided to blow up in the middle of the streets XP Awesome story btw! ^^

HAHAHA.. i really like how something funny or cool happens in the end.. lol.. the ending was funny :))
Good story! hope to read more of yours
xoxoAngiexoxo

THAT WAS HILARIOUS!
every chapter i read, earned me a look on my younger sister's face that said: she has gone nutters
but this story was seriously cool.

Pretty damn funny!

- xSilentScreamsx

LOLOL! Wahada cute ending xDD!

... LOL! Her attitude is, in a way, similar to mine when i'm in a bad mood XD!!

omg i love this story! it made me crack up so many times my family members thought i've gone nuts! thanks for writing such an entertaining story, and keep them coming :D

I love this story! It was so cute! The ending was also very funny.

nice

I had a lot of fun reading this! Thank you for writing such a nice story =)

I liked it a lot.