Reviews for Visible To You

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merylin 2008-05-05 ch 8, anon.	abuse=)) :D OMG i can't stop laughing... :P especially the last part... :P...i love the line"I wouldn't mind being invisible for the rest of my life as long as you could see me"...yea...SO sweet... :P anyway, hope to read more o fyour stories! loveltos, merylin
KamichamaKarinLover25 2008-04-02 ch 8,	abusePfft! CORNFLOWERS ARE BLUE! AHAHAHA! SO KAWAII!
elfspirit7 2008-02-28 ch 8,	abuseAWESOME, although the end seemed kinda open ended (like there was more, which I wouldn't mind at all), anyways if there are more chapters awesome, if not thanks for writing such as an awesome story XD!
SakuraJade 2008-02-25 ch 8,	abuseHahahahahahahahaha! Oh my gosh I absolutely loved this story! It was SO awesome and extremely funny! I laughed so much, it was great! The actually writing was excellent too, from lack of typos and grammatical errors, to the writing style itself. I really enjoyed your characterization of all the characters. They came off as high school students, but still retained some of their old school CCS characterization; it was done perfectly if I do say so myself. I mean, I dig keeping characters in character but in being teenagers now odds are they would not completely retain the personalities they had when they were ten back in the original show. So your characterization makes total sense. I also really liked that Meiling was just Syaoran's close cousin and not some bitchy chick who liked him like so many other stories portray her. Oh it was so refreshing ^_^ Plus I'm a bit of a Meiling fan so . . . yeah I like when I see her in roles like in this story! The plot was adorable and funny as well as interesting too. And when Syaoran became visible again, I thought I was going to DIE with laughter at how Toya saw him and freaked out!! So funny. And very well done too, very believable actions and attitudes on everyone's part. And the issue between Tomoyo and Sakura was well written too. Friends do fight, even really close friends like Sakura and Tomoyo, it's part of life. You portrayed their attitudes and feelings realistically so that was nice and I'm glad they seemed to be well on their way to making up, so yay for that lol The way Syaoran and Sakura got together was really cute as well. Madam Mirai's reason for choosing Sakura cracked me up haha. She was a funny character too, I liked her. I thought Cornflowers were blue!! But I really wasn't sure, not much of a flower girl, I like carnations myself ^_^; But it ended up being funny how you had it just be Madam Mirai's mistake lol I mean hey you can't be perfect all the time even if you're powers are real I suppose. She still predicted Meiling's situation pretty close. But yeah that was funny too. And finally the last line of the entire story, priceless hahahaha Over all, this ended up being one amazing read and I'm so glad I came across it because I thoroughly enjoyed every chapter! Thank you so much for taking the time to contribute (and finish) such a splendid piece of CCS fanfiction! ^_^
EZ gal 2008-02-05 ch 8,	abuselove the ending. your brothers in the car beside us
digi-gal-rox 2008-01-16 ch 8,	abusesuch a cute and hilarious story!
dark mirth 2007-12-09 ch 8,	abuseHahahaha! This was a fabulous story!
whitewave16 2007-11-07 ch 8,	abuseVery nice wrap-up chapter. Looking forward to more fanfics from you!
whitewave16 2007-11-07 ch 3,	abuseIt's funny how Syaoran harassed Sakura onto helping him. I also liked that she is spunky and not easily intimidated, resulting in delightful quality S&S moments.
whitewave16 2007-11-07 ch 4,	abuseI liked how Sakura messed with Syaoran's mind (the knife wielding/evil look scene). I was in stitches in the dress shopping scene with Tomoyo!
whitewave16 2007-11-07 ch 5,	abusenice development here in having syaoran help out sakura with her love life. i liked skaura's several hilarious attempts in doing so. i guess this was where syaoran started to realize that he likes her. my favorite lines: "You know an awful lot about flirting with guys," Sakura commented. Syaoran didn't like the insinuation. "That's BECAUSE I'm a guy. I know what we like." "Uh huh." Oh, what he would have given to tickle her to death and wipe that smug smirk off her face. His common sense told him that would be a bad thing to do in public. Maybe later." "Fine! Syaoran is the smartest and cutest guy in the entire world!" Sakura yelled it at the top of her lungs, hoping it would blow his eardrums."
whitewave16 2007-11-07 ch 6,	abuseI loved how you constructed the characters' dialogues, especially in this chapter. Sakura seems to find herself in many situations where she had to think fast to explain her talking to herself or her odd comments or restraining herself from reacting to Syaoran's antics. I liked the scene where Syaoran cheers up Sakura. My favorite line was: "And I wouldn't mind being invisible for the rest of my life as long as you could see me." So romantic! The first kiss was also great, especially Sakura's line at the end. :->
whitewave16 2007-11-07 ch 7,	abuseThere are so many things I loved about this chappie! 1) The scene where Syaoran and Sakura wake up and his antics on "she just wanted to get into his pants", etc. It was hilarious! 2) I'm glad that Syaoran was not invisible anymore and I also enjoyed the fact that I didn't see it coming. It was good that you did not give any clue how he could be "cured" so it was a total surprise when I realized it here. :-> Touya's initial reaction to Syaoran's presence in Sakura's room was priceless! 3) The most memorable scene for me is the one where Syaoran and Sakura both fail miserably in explaining to Touya that they did not have sex, but just slept together! My favorite line: "Syaoran convulsed with suppressed laughter while Touya convulsed with suppressed murder intentions." 4) The cherry on the soda: When Touya let them get away when Fujitaka arrived! Looking forward to more "priceless" fanfics from you. :->
whitewave16 2007-11-06 ch 1,	abuseI enjoyed this well-written story. I also liked that Sakura is more spunky here--enjoyed the ending especially the times when Sakura always aims to get the last word in but Syaoran manages to beat her at least once. :->
cherrysakurawolf 2007-10-28 ch 8,	abuseLOL this is really funny

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