gah! I love leopika!! Please write more... *drools* ... heh. o.^

Wow! Cliffhanger! Please continue, i just can't wait to know what'll happen next!
Leopika forever! *-*

Hello!

this fic is interesting!! will u be continuing it?? please do!!

RaTt

That's so sad... *sniff*

erm...i only started searching for hunter x hunter fics recently. i think you have a pretty good thing going on here. i hope you will continue with this.

Ah! You have to write more! Soon!
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... here. :)
nice scenic narration. you used words that are easy to picture, but complex enough to up the fic's readability level.
are you going to give the driver an identity? he sounds interesting. :)
about the blood types: type o people, at least in the anime universe, seem to be the generous, kind-hearted protagonists. just wanted to say that. it kinda fits leorio, don't you think?
cliffhanger. you ended on a cliffhanger. you said you'd update the last time i talked to you... so where's the update? *poke* (like i have a right to complain. *winces at the very late, very unfinished chapter 9*)
good luck writing the next chapter! :3

i said i'd review, didn't i? sorry this is so late, but better late than never, ne?
hmm... good grammatical construction, not too flowery, but not simple, either. leorio's quite on-character, kurapika seems a bit too serious, but that's to be expected.
kurapika, still underage. *snicker* somehow the notion has never occurred to me. he acts like he's pushing eighty instead of eighteen.
kurapika crying - i guess this will be my only nitpick out of both chapters. i see him as someone too strong to let even leorio see his emotional weaknesses. but you're the author, and this particular scene fits *your* fic. i shouldn't complain. :)
"Yes, and it will completely destroy me. So what?" - cool... sad, but cool. very kakkoi...
"But I don't love you . . . and I never will." - ouch. that hurt.
- to be continued...

Oh... interesting. ^^ Well, looking forward to new chapters! =P Can't wait to find out what happens next. Well, anyhooz, update soon!

Much mahal,
KBJ-chan

I'm really wonering why in the world are you not updating.
is there any thing wrong.
come on, be nice and update your stories.

Hey there! this is really awesome! it seems there are lots of people out there that is demading for your update. how come your not doing it? so, do you have some petty arguments with your co-author? hope not, cause the story is really interesting. and having a conflict will sure stop this story.

I'm begging u to please hasten your work and post up your next chapter. if not, the whole story, ne?

hey there!
this is really interesting. I've read the rest of the chapter and i can't wait to read the rest of the story.
anyway, since you don't update much (and i hate you for that)
i hope you'll write a longer chapter next.
and i need to see a different leorio here, not the tyipical "okay, i love you kurapika, and i forgive you..." for crying out loud *rolls eye*
made him a little bit ahrd to get...if you can.
and oh, please be kind enough to update your work regularly.
i'm waiting...

hi! I've been really struck at how the story is going on. i just hope it'll turn as good as it seems.
a kurapika without memory? really cool!
wonder what happen to him and my beloved leo! ^^;
I hope you won't make leo-chan a little overboard here when it comes to being mushy.
i mean, most of the fics i've read regarding leopika, he-leorio- is the one who'se always bieng so emotional.
your summary suggest a different thing here, so i'm hoping it's going to be like that.
make leo a little bit hard to get. if not, then not as sensitive as he is...
why, i mean he's already a doctor here with a lonely pass -including being rejected by Kura.
so i hope you'll update soon!
not next year k?

*groan* when are you planning to update this? next millenia?

yeah. when? when are you planning to update this for petes sake! please update!

And i'm hoping and waiting for your next leopika fics.

UPDATE soon!