Excellent story. The way you approached it is definitely a unique one from the other Cardcaptor Sakura ones we've read on this fanfiction community.

It's a sweet story and had a very nice ending. If there was anything we would ask you to improve on, it would have been making it longer. There's great detail, but making the story longer would have been nice. It felt like a one-shot story divided into several chapters. If that was what you were going for, then it was great. By the way the comment above is supposed to be a positive one if it didn't sound like one. Hehehehe.

Definitely would have liked to read more, especially the ending.

Great job on the story!

Very cute story... you should of gone farther or into more detail, was too short, if you can beleive that!
~Feathers

Sweet!! ^_^ Write more!

Whoa! go syaoran! who would ever expect that? do continue!

Hehehe! That was funny! Iris calmed down after Syaoran held her. . . hehehehe . . .

Wow, cool fic! Great, hope you just continue it soon.

CHAPPIE!

this story has sparked a lot of my interest. i really wanna see how things turn out in the next chapter...SOON!

** out and nadja trips out

LoL! This is a relly cool fic! The fact that its narrated by Iris too is cool. . . =)

poor sakura! this must suck having to live with someone who's inconsiderate of everyone else. >_< well, i hope syaoran's behavior gets better and...

CONTINUE!

Syao ia really damn bad. . .cool. . .poor Sakura. . .oh well. . .its gettin interesting. . .

Cool! This is really fun to read! Please continue!

i feel like i've read this before...hm... have you posted this story before? well, CONTINUE!

* thAt wAS a rEally geWd chApTeR... yOO sHuLd wRyTe mORe... emAiL mEE wHeN tHe neXt chAppy coMeS oUt...thANkS*

OH continue!