squall bounced? omgroflmao

still the best after 5 years for an au

still my favorite story after 5 long and changing years.

o my god thats to funny

good story, nice ending. You should be proud of your work.

we went to the zoo hahahaha i used to tell my sister that

squall is acting wierd! he laughs now and he's not a study/fighting machine, not to mention he isn't stoic and he never says, "whatever." great story and great writing skill. the previous comment was only for if you was tring to make him the way he should be. i don't mind him being out of character...really! ::runs away crying over his idol's wierd behavior::

really good story, relaxing in a way

cool story...uh...dat's all i gotta say!

great story i realy liked how you left it up to the readers to tie everything up

Hey, great job. I loved the Squall/Rinoa interaction at the beginning, although the way they were acting so hostile to each other, I almost believed it wouldn't work. XD There were some hilarious moments, the Jack ** jokes, the blackmail, the witty banters, eh.. some classic parts. It's too bad it's over, but there's the sequel which I'll get to reading! Once again, excellent.

That was unbelievable. You are an awsome author. Please write more of the same.

Aw! I love Squinoas. They're so cute! Well, I'm going to read a few more of your stories.

The parents’ reactions to the kissing scene was absolutely hilarious, I loved the towels are down the hall bit. It really shows the truth and redundancy in our everyday life. The part with him leaving was very well done, I loved his concern for leaving both Rinoa and Sly, truly classic. The reunion in Dollet was sweet and poignant; it gave closer to the story. Again, I Hope you never stop writing, you are truly one of a kind, and a wonderful person in real life. Thank you for so much.

I know I have read some of your newer stuff, and I honestly know you have matured into your writing, but there is something special about your original stories. I love the scene where he is unsure that is him Rinoa is talking about, being in love. The way she finally asks him openly and honest is so sweet, yet proves how both feel. You have a way about you. ;)

I loved the interaction between Squall and Mike; it shows his sensitive side, and how he has changed since the beginning, although I wouldn’t expect anything less from Squall. And honestly, how the brothers care for their sister even though they wouldn’t admit is so true to life. I know my son says his sister drives him crazy, but there is nothing he wouldn’t do for her. I think you have managed to capture it perfectly; I just love your overall writing skills.

You don’t own Smokey and the Bear? Darn it, there went a whole lot of copyright money... oh well. Sorry I find that reference funny, maybe I am just feeling old right...I remember the seventies, gasp! Again, I loved the whole chapter and how the characters interact. The part with the storm was great, and somehow a very playful mood between them... which is always the best. And watching the stars, is beautiful, a wonderful meaning to the whole story.