Great keep going!

It was really great I loved it. But try reading over your work after your finished. Some of the sentences were a little hard to follow, but that's okay because it's a comon mistake. (like me, I do it, *looks around the room to see if anyone's listening.*) Well, Keep posting I want to see what happens to Pheobe!

other than that the story is pretty good

wats scr and why do people pick on draco
draco is really HOTT
really SMART
mean and arrogant ALL the slytherins fear him
but he is still SUPER hot

That was good, keep writing.