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Willow-98
2008-03-13
ch 17,
abuseI really love this story. You did an awesome job. Have you considered a sequel? That would be great lol, I want Alec to come back ;p.
Whirlwind421
2007-09-19
ch 8,
abuseAlec gone! No!! Never!! Great story!! I love it!!
Whirlwind421
2007-09-19
ch 6,
abuseI love it!! It's awesome!
Whirlwind421
2007-09-19
ch 4,
abuseI love it!! It's awsome! All Alec has to do is see really far. Or some other aspect of his trangenicness to realize he's not human!!
Whirlwind421
2007-09-19
ch 3,
abuseI really hope Alec doesn't believe the lies the doc is feeding him! Awesome story!! I love it!
SalemsChild
2007-07-03
ch 17,
abuseI've been enjoying your Supernatural story, "Wilderness Tips", and went looking to see what else you've written. I absolutely LOVED Jensen in Dark Angel as Ben/Alec/X5-494, as I absolutely LOVE him in SN as Dean. Anyway...your DA story, "Make Me Mad", piqued my interest and I've spent the afternoon reading it from start to finish. Gotta say, I'm glad you added the epilogue. I got to the end of Chapter 16 and was like "No!! You can't end it there! I've got to find out if he's OK!" The epilogue, of course, didn't tie everything up in a neat little bundle, but you gave it just enough of a nudge that the reader's imagination could finish things in whatever way that feels fulfilling to them. In the end, it's a much more satisfying way of ending a truly engaging and spot on story. I think I'd have a hard time writing Original Cindy's wise-**, street-smart banter, but you nailed it. Kudos!

BUT...and I'm sure you knew this was coming...as I said, I'm also reading your SN story, "Wilderness Tips" (WT) and I couldn't help but notice that you started your DA story ("M") in '03 and finished it in '07 (!). Please, PLEASE, PLEASSE tell me it's not going to take you four years to complete the SN fic, 'cause if it does, well I'm just going to have to go into rehab for WT withdrawl. I know I'm infamous from some pretty long delays in story updates, myself, but it's been a month already. I'm begging you not to make me/us wait much longer!
Xdaisy chainX
2007-06-19
ch 17,
abuseeverything about this fic was awesome except the ending, u said it would be happy :( *sniff* lol
i get the whole rushed thing thoughm dean winchester is worth boycotting DA fics for lol
even if alec is awesome too.
anyways. nice idea for this fic, but i want more!? lol what happened to him!? is he ok?! did he come back
tis like the season final of season two of DA, leaves u wanting more
but well written and interesting :D
well done
XsarahX
Kaoz
2007-03-14
ch 12,
abuseYep, the 2nd MakeMeMad wasnt up to par.
The writer changed your ending then added a bunch of fluff. characters dont even sound like them selves.
I thought it was a waste of energy. What did you think?

Loved the ending here. I even plugged it in my fic. =) you're in for some new readers... lol
Kaoz
2007-03-01
ch 8,
abuseSo far I really like this fic. Alec sounds real the way he did on the show. I can't wait to finish reading this. I have it save to my flashdrive and read at work when I get the chance but then a customer comes in and I cant rid of them fast enough!

I hope the 2nd MakeMeMad is as good as this one but beign as it was written by a different person I wont get my hopes up.
InSecret
2007-02-14
ch 17,
abuseHi there. So wow, last time I reviewed the 'end' of this I was way late; this time I'm right on time. Meant to be, lol.

I liked your original ending, but I've gotta say this IS better. It adds a whole lot that probably was necessary. It's SAD but far more realistic than Alec just snapping straight back into his smartass self. Even he's not unbreakable, and you conveyed that well.

Max was very understanding as well; it was sweet. I think sometimes she's written as a little TOO bitchy/abrupt, but she really does care about Alec and that shows in this.

Anywho. I'm glad you gave us a little more closure. Still plenty left open-ended, but that's good, gives us something to go on and think about. I really did enjoy this. Top stuff!
a reader
2007-02-14
ch 17, anon.
abuseAH! He's LEAVING! Well, at least he'll be back, plus, this is a way better ending than the way you had it! LOL! Thanks for the addition! HOPE Alec finds himself! GREAT JOB! Have fun with Supernatural!
Poisoned Princess
2007-02-14
ch 17,
abuseWow, that was really good. And kinda sad. but I like hoe it's not one of those endings where everything just gets all put back together and everything's just all happy happy. Very nice.
purplebunnywabbit
2007-02-14
ch 17,
abuseI'm glad you did this, it gives us just a little more, and then some more contemplation on our behalf, but still good!
Poisoned Princess
2007-01-14
ch 16,
abuseThat was a cool ending. I like how it just sort of ends, it doesn't entirely say what happened. That's cool.
Poisoned Princess
2007-01-13
ch 7,
abuseOld chapter, I know, but that was so awesome. I was almost like crying over it. Well, more excited than upset, but that was so well done, I just loved it!
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