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Anphibium 7/30/05 . chapter 1
Wouldn't what they did constitute and act of war against the Commonwealth? That's a pretty stupid thing to do.
Wing Omega 11/17/04 . chapter 3
Is Helena Stark supposed to be related to Admiral Stark?
D. Lerious 3/24/03 . chapter 1
Great sequel so far! The related story, parts of which I've read, was good. FYI though, it's standard procedure to indent dialogue, I used not do this as well.
Hope for Love 3/19/03 . chapter 8
A beautiful story with a wonderful ending. Thank you for this.
Hope for Love 3/19/03 . chapter 8
A beautiful story with a wonderful ending. Thank you for this.
Hope for Love 3/19/03 . chapter 7
2 chapters left. I can't wait to see how this wonderful story ends.
Troll99 3/19/03 . chapter 8
Hehe, I knew you wouldn't let ROmmie die. Well, at the end I must say that I really like this story. It's so cute and yet deals with the aspect, that no one hadn't written about before (at least not to my knowledge).

Keep up good work!
Troll99 3/19/03 . chapter 6
Is it her or not? How can you stop at that point? Have I ever said, that I hate cliffhangers - when others use them :)?
JA Baker 3/19/03 . chapter 6
I ain't posting the next chapter till tomorrow.

I’ve finished the story, but I’m making you all wait to see what happens :-P
Hope for Love 3/19/03 . chapter 6
I can't wait to see their vengeance at what happened. I'm gonna love it.
Troll99 3/18/03 . chapter 5
Harper has a plan! God! Let's just hope it works. Somehow I don't believe you'd let Rommie die. I have to say, that I really love this story and can hardly wait for the next chapter.
Hope for Love 3/18/03 . chapter 5
I love the fact that you update really fast so that I don't have to wait for the next chapter too long. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Troll99 3/18/03 . chapter 4
Oh, oh, oh! My God! What is Harper going to do? Better even: what's Dylan going to do? Now I am really intrigued!
Troll99 3/18/03 . chapter 3
My oh my, I hope this is going to end well! Leaving Rommie alone behind? I'm not sure if this was a good idea!
Hope for Love 3/18/03 . chapter 3
The people of New Salem sound like Genites or the Machin Alpha people. I hope they do nothing to ruin the relationship between Dylan and Rommie.
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