Oh mai gawd I love this! Kid/Harle is one of my fav pairings! You have to continue-! Very interesting view of it, too.

Interesting,I think you've shown us a Side of Kid rarely seen by the eyes of Man.

This is a little confusing and it doesn't explain where the feeling came from but don't feel bad you set the mood like a pro [something I would kill to be able to do] and I can really tell how the character is feeling you just need to explain a little more.

keep writing! _

Ohh, intriguing. Write more!

Uhhh, I really don't like yuri/yaoi, so there! Hah!

Very nice! Your story is the first Yuri fic i've ever read in CHrono Cross! I plan to do one too heheheh _. Keep up the good work!

Interesting, but a yuri, that's new...

Who's her?

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