First, i must have missed a lot, because last i saw, Sasami (and even her older Tsunami form) had blue hair.

Second, poor Mihoshi (i mean the one who lost her Kiyone... yeah, i may have stopped at the first batch of OAV, but even i know what happened to Kiyone... i just don't know what she looks like.) seeing an alternate of her dead beloved like that... kinda reminds me of the scene in "Shattered Ice" where Ami seeis Rei, Minako, Makoto and... herself in the locket.

Loved that.

Wow...interesting. Twisted. And, yeah, I can see Ayeka/Ryouko as one of the most commonly shipped couples.

Good, good. Wonderful. We've already got one Kiyo/Miho and an Ayeka/Ryouko. Also, the Ryouko and Minagi from the Locket. Interesting.

theres actually a cannon prequal to tenchi with a Ayeka/Ryouko pairing, that why they hate eachother now.(although it was rated 18...heh.)

I'm laughing so hard. This story has a certain quality, which I shall call...

SMOK HELLA CRACK

The bit about Techi seeing lots of Ryouko/Ayeka in the woods was funny... higher probability or something... so in this fic, the canon universe is in the minority, statistically speaking.

Not bad.Not bad at all.One suggestion:besides a female version of Tenchi,could you also include male counterparts to the girls?

Utterly confusing and wacky in a good way. Very cute.

Hi, Cima Gaharu from shoujoai.com here, nice story. I liked it alot. I dont remember bartending Ryouko and Minagi from your Arigusas Locket series though. But thats probably because I've only read about 3 chapters of it!

Anyways, you obviously have more skills in writing than me(just read some of my crap and see what I mean...). But that was a nice little short. I like Ryouko/Older Sasami alot and I'd also like to see a Ryouko/Younger Sasami only if it was done well. Anyways, keep it up. WooT.

As always, I really like your fics, but a question has been burning for some time now. Who in the heck IS Yume? Is she somewhere in the Tenchi-verse that I've missed, or is she an original character. I'm so confused.