Very Beutifully Made!

Your fic is so sad. Who's "she"? If they love each other, Kougaiji should leave the other girl and be happy with Yaone instead. If you're planning to make another chapter, maybe you could make Kougaiji leave the other girl and return to Yaone. And they'll both be happy coz they're together again. They'll be happy again just like before. If you do that, it will make the fic nicer. And at least the fic will end with a happy ending. I never really liked sad endings. I'm not forcing you to do this. Your fics really nice.

It's so sad.. I like this fic. I even almost cried while reading this. I really support KouxYaone fics! Pls write more KouxYaone fics.

Hey... this is SO sad. Your best fic yet, in my opinion. Even if there's no background story for this, I think it still works- a sort of "invisible force" keeping the two apart, which is parallel to their thoughts. :P

lengthy review... *coughcough* yaone x hakkai... ;p

*sigh* why would you even care for someone like that? To me, it's not loyalty, it's stupidity in this real world *sorry P* But i don't wanna see you suffer either. You've done too much for him...

And the more i'm reminded of that guy, the more freaking angry i get.

HOW COULD HE?

yeah, ok...put aside my feelings, i must say it's a good fic ) extremely sad, definately the best *serious* fic in here

Hahaha, was gonna write something else just to humour you but decided not to :p Cool fic, so sweet... I see where you got your "inspiration" ;) very sad, they love each other but he has to leave. why was he with the other girl in the first place though?

She? Who's she? Rather confusing, although quite sweet.

Any next chapter? Or a sequel? I'm abit confused... what happened before? And who's the "she"?

You can't expect me to believe a nameless paramount to come between Kou and Yaone...? IYA...call me a sentimental/romantic/idiotic fool...but I support K/Y...!

I am your friend, right? That's why I review. Because I'm your friend. Not because I support K/Y (I prefer Yaone to be with someone else, other than Kougaiji...Hakkai yes, maybe with Dokugakuji and Goku and Goyjo)

The only comment I have is: "I AM SO CONFUSED!"

No offense, I like you.