 Willofthewisp 2009-03-15 . chapter 1This was so emotional, sweet, but full of depth at the same time. Poor Jackie. I always felt so bad she and Hyde both had to know the pain of abandonment. I like how you point out they use the same tone of voice when they convince other people they're fine when they're really not. I also like Hyde remembering when Eric had to spell it out for him that his mom was not going to come back and how he can't bring himself to say those words to Jackie. Going and getting her a sandwich, listening to her, tickling her--it's all so caring and so tender and I'm so glad she tells him again that she loves him. He needs to be reassured once in a while. This was just so sweet, really. Good job. |
 liz at the disco 2009-03-15 . chapter 1This was beautiful. The characterisation was spot-on and I loved their little banter and the Hyde and Kitty interaction. |
 hondagirl 2008-04-28 . chapter 1This was so cute and I'm glad I found it. You have Jackie and Hyde's personalities down nicely. I know its been awhile since you wrote this but I just wanted to tell you I enjoyed this. :) |
 romancer17 2006-07-30 . chapter 1 Beautiful work. I love Jackie's attitude, and the way Hyde tries to help. You really captured Hyde's character (or what we understand is Hyde's character). Again, wonderful work! |
 Modern-English 2006-06-11 . chapter 1Perfect. Just perfect. :)
Half-jap was here. |
 marianne-larsen 2005-12-11 . chapter 1Wow... That was just.. wow! Amazing! Incredible! I absolutely loved it.. adorable. Your writing skills are magnificent and the characterisation was great. Just, yeah, wow!! Hehe! |
 astroz0mbies 2005-10-10 . chapter 1Nicely done. |
 Lizzie 2004-02-29 . chapter 1 Perfect. I wouldn't change a thing. |
 The Moon's Heart 2003-08-15 . chapter 1I loved your story it was cute and very sweet. |
 Beth 2003-07-23 . chapter 1 Well done; good job. Very romantic and sweet. Thought you did a good job on characterization. Please continue. |
 Hafthand 2003-07-16 . chapter 1Oh this one was really sweet. Great job with the Hyde/Jackie interaction. And the beginning part with just the boys was hilarious! |
 Starlight77 2003-06-27 . chapter 1Oh, liked it. Nice and short, sweet, and cute!
J.B.+S.H. |
 Jess 2003-05-31 . chapter 1 Wow, that was really good, loved it. |
 Cassandra Mulder 2003-05-25 . chapter 1*cries* Aw! That was *so* sweet. *sigh* Just perfect. There was nothing out of character at all. It was just lovely. |
 Princess Twilite 2003-05-23 . chapter 1Oh, wow. *Good* Jackie/Hyde fic. I LOVE it. Hyde was very in character, reluctantly wanting to make things better for her. And Jackie? Hun, you had me aching for her.
This was excellent! |