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Willofthewisp
2009-03-15 . chapter 1
This was so emotional, sweet, but full of depth at the same time. Poor Jackie. I always felt so bad she and Hyde both had to know the pain of abandonment. I like how you point out they use the same tone of voice when they convince other people they're fine when they're really not. I also like Hyde remembering when Eric had to spell it out for him that his mom was not going to come back and how he can't bring himself to say those words to Jackie. Going and getting her a sandwich, listening to her, tickling her--it's all so caring and so tender and I'm so glad she tells him again that she loves him. He needs to be reassured once in a while. This was just so sweet, really. Good job.
liz at the disco
2009-03-15 . chapter 1
This was beautiful. The characterisation was spot-on and I loved their little banter and the Hyde and Kitty interaction.
hondagirl
2008-04-28 . chapter 1
This was so cute and I'm glad I found it. You have Jackie and Hyde's personalities down nicely. I know its been awhile since you wrote this but I just wanted to tell you I enjoyed this. :)
romancer17
2006-07-30 . chapter 1
Beautiful work. I love Jackie's attitude, and the way Hyde tries to help. You really captured Hyde's character (or what we understand is Hyde's character). Again, wonderful work!
Modern-English
2006-06-11 . chapter 1
Perfect. Just perfect. :)

Half-jap was here.
marianne-larsen
2005-12-11 . chapter 1
Wow... That was just.. wow! Amazing! Incredible! I absolutely loved it.. adorable. Your writing skills are magnificent and the characterisation was great. Just, yeah, wow!! Hehe!
astroz0mbies
2005-10-10 . chapter 1
Nicely done.
Lizzie
2004-02-29 . chapter 1
Perfect. I wouldn't change a thing.
The Moon's Heart
2003-08-15 . chapter 1
I loved your story it was cute and very sweet.
Beth
2003-07-23 . chapter 1
Well done; good job. Very romantic and sweet. Thought you did a good job on characterization. Please continue.
Hafthand
2003-07-16 . chapter 1
Oh this one was really sweet. Great job with the Hyde/Jackie interaction. And the beginning part with just the boys was hilarious!
Starlight77
2003-06-27 . chapter 1
Oh, liked it. Nice and short, sweet, and cute!

J.B.+S.H.
Jess
2003-05-31 . chapter 1
Wow, that was really good, loved it.
Cassandra Mulder
2003-05-25 . chapter 1
*cries* Aw! That was *so* sweet. *sigh* Just perfect. There was nothing out of character at all. It was just lovely.
Princess Twilite
2003-05-23 . chapter 1
Oh, wow. *Good* Jackie/Hyde fic. I LOVE it. Hyde was very in character, reluctantly wanting to make things better for her. And Jackie? Hun, you had me aching for her.

This was excellent!
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