"...gonna stop twisting the knife soon?"

Ah that made me laugh. Very cute. I love Tenpou! ^^, THanks.

^^; Oh my...he did WHAT to get him out...?

... how interesting...

oh yeah!
da anime/manga really needs this!

Actually, the part was really lacking in the manga, I totally agree !
More or few what I was imagining too... (well maybe + the part where Kenren and Tenpou would try - very hard- to explain Goku what means secret - for the next meeting with Konzen - especially if he surprises them in the same position than in the end of you ficcie !)
Bye...

Very nice, actually ^_^ I'm a big fan of that pairing! ^_~