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| christianrockstar 2005-12-16 ch 1,  | abuseAll I can say is-Why haven't you continued? This is great! |
| mac111 2004-12-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseIve always liked the brother-brother relationship between Graham and Merril and am really liking this so far. I just wish you would finish! Its driving me nutty, lol! Will Graham save Merril? I hope so. Its been quite a while since you've updated, PLEASE do so again very soon, I really like this story :) |
| Plastic Fantastic Lover 2004-02-20 ch 1, | abusewhoa! dude! awesome! this is really good! please update! |
| Zhane 2003-10-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhoa.. this is GOOD... will you write more? This is really good... I like your dialogue, and the interior stuff in Merrill's head is great -- please! finish this! it's got potential! |
| sarah 2003-04-10 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is a really good story! it was written so well! keep it up :) update soon |
| JayBird0009 2003-03-31 ch 1, | abuseOMG! CONTINUE! |
| jenna 2003-03-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseCool. Very well writen. Hurry and get the next part out soon, cause i really want to know what happens. |
| Bozcorelli 2003-03-29 ch 1, | abuseOMG OMG OMG! YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE! I LOVE IT! GOOD JOB! |
| from please write more 2003-03-20 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was the greatest story that ypu wrote. write more like that and please please finish the story soon. thanks. bye |
| Lambi 2003-03-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseso good. I was actually thinking about writing a stary a lot like this. oh! make them have to hurt merril in order to save him! yes... i know im cruel. but it would be cool! lol great job. update soon! |
| allie351 2003-03-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery powerfully written. I hope you continue with this story soon. I can never figure out how to spell Merrill's name. I usually spell it Meryl, but I see it always spelled Merril or Merrill. Exactly how is it spelled? Anyway, I hope you decide to continue this soon, it is really good. |
| Chase M. Dakota 2003-03-18 ch 1, | abusethis is so good. please continue soon. can you let something bad happen to merrill? |
| La Tierna1 2003-03-18 ch 1, | abuseMasterfully written...I wish I could write like this! I look foreward to reading more from this story, I must tell you. Keep up the stunning work. |
| erin 2003-03-18 ch 1, anon. | abusevery clever i like this a lot its very orginal poor merrill though graham will save him and the kids right right!!? anyways i hope to see the next chapter in the near future ok well update soon please! erin |