Positively Lovely!
One or two typos, but nothing major. -_^
A very vivid and well-spun tale.
It stays true to the movie, is in character, and is incredibly entertaining.
Poor Rock... *pulls a sad face*

Wow... This is awesome! This is perfect! The true essence of Rock!

YAY! This is so cool!

:jaw drops to the floor in shock: DUDE!! that was AMAZING!

When I first read this, I had to read it again. It was really good, and I understood it all the second time round. Metropolis is a fave film of mine, and I'd love to read more of your fics on it.
Later
Leo

Baka Duke Red. BAKABAKABAKABAKABAKA!

NO! Stupid beak-nosed politician! How could he stand to make such a cute little boy so SAD?!?!?! CURSE YOU DUKE PURPLE! CURSE YOU!

good! good! good!

That was really good, the duality and all. ^_^

I LOVE it! I really liked the movie of metropolis, hated the ending, it would have been alright, if Rock hadn't died! he was the coolest character! but, then, you wouldn't have written this. anyways, I like the way you make rock start to hate the duke. its really kinda weird, how he's killing him, to save him, and yet, doing it in revenge (sorta) ya know?
you did a GREAT job of writting it like that!

Alright, this sounds so corny, but I kinda cried a little.
Why does the bad guy's lair always have a self destruct button?

whoa this tory ricked! Very vivid, very real. Rock was portrayed wonderfully! Its good to a see a fic where Rock seeks some vengance to his father, he was so mean to him in the movie! lol, this was fun to read ^_^

Wow!

That was amazing! It's wonderful to see another Metropolis fanfiction out by you, and I enjoyed this one just as much as the last! A wonderful (yet creepy) twist on that whole thing! (I don't think anyone else has yet tried something from that point of veiw, so that's neat, new ideas!)

Beautiful writing as always, and I hope you write more soon! (And thank you for your reveiws!^_^)

Very nice! (nice?) anyway, I have to approve of the story. It really is very good. Actually, I was wondering if I could put it up on my Rock shrine's fic page. (at http://inksplat.bravepages.com/rock/) Please get back to me at icemice01@hotmail.com, thanks.

-Ja ne!

Very powerful indeed.


You do know that Duke Red is insane don't you? More insane then the entire cast put together. (Yes folks, even crazier than Fifi.)

I. . . can't write. . .I'm too exhausted.

This fic is too sad. . . Too much hate and bad things. I like soft happy things. Like hair bows and dolls and lambs.