Oh! Very intresting! I like it, it almost reminds me of JtHm. Very dark and disturbing. I give it umm some good mark! *Grin*

Great story

Awesome story. I hope there's a sequel.

it's sad, but i love spike kicking ass, so yes please, i'd like some more

Cool. Kill Cecily, She needs to die!

want more gore, cool story, mwahahahahahaha!

Kill someone else. In fact, kill everyone who annoyed Spike. Maybe you could kill Riley.

heh. Sick fun for everyone who felt sad for William in "Fool for Love." A good, smart read. The poetry was fun too.

Ugh! So that is what became of dear Spikes mum. Did he have other siblings? Write another story set in this series?

I wonder if I should feel badly,

at this malevelant glee,

your bloody awful poems,

instilled in me lol

Ha! And a good riddence to 'em!, but seriously, people really should consider weather or not someone is a homocidial maniac or prone to bouts of soullessness before insulting their poetry! LOL

My friends and I were betting on who would write this fic first! Defeinetly write the sequel where he gets rid of Cecily, how could she turn him down? (actually, it's easier to tell as he isn't nearly so good-looking when he's William).

Your poetry was perfect - mixing William's, er, artistic soul with Spike's mocking and violent nature. I loved it!

More gore and blood. Luv it. I luv this new story. Bloody awful poetry III is as great as the first two story. I want more and more...