Hello! .

I rather enjoyed this fic mainly because of the generalized ramble. It was quite refreshing, really.

I do appreciate the fact that the character who shall remain unnamed spoke in more flowery tones. No mangled phrases to destroy the characterization.

Your spelling was quite nice, and grammar also was lovely. At some points repetition affected paragraphs, but nothing serious at all. All in all, a really nice fic. .

SolarCloud

Yay! I like it. It's refreshing how poetically Sephiroth speaks... or maybe I've just been writing/reading a buch of dumb muses lately *imediately pounded by Subaru* -_- Stupid Subaru. Anyway, as I was saying, I truely enjoyed this. I love your style, as well. I'll have to read more by you... Link

hm...not a yaoi fan but i don't discriminate. Good story anyway. Poetic.

Oh... that was really nice.