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Reviews For: Goobye dear friend

Dawn N
2003-03-20
ch 1,
abuseWould you consider writing a companion piece to this? Because I can't really decide who's dead and who's standing over the grave. I like what you've done -- it sort of leaves it open to the reader, but have a heart -- give up some more info. Maybe write the dying scene and what exactly happened, after all, you brought it up and said they fought to save this person for hours, but failed. I think I know by what means the mystery person died, but I'm still unsure of who it was. Please consider writing a companion piece -- it doesn't have to be some long magnum opus -- just something. Have mercy!
...lost...
2003-03-19
ch 1, anon.
abusei dont get it. who died? and who is talking/thinking? be a little more clearer next time you write a story O_o
JA Baker
2003-03-19
ch 1,
abuseWho is it, and who are they thinking about?
MaryRose
2003-03-19
ch 1,
abuseIs this one of your fics where the reader decides who is who? I've got an idea. Maybe it doesn't really matter. It was still sad.
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